Gezzus...you really got to the point there with the horror thing...

Man, you delivered well ;)

As one had said before me, you did your job rather well. To most, it would be sick, twisted, and such. To me...
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...what a strange form of beauty, hm? I really hope you enjoyed writing this, for it most certainly entertained me.

Glace

Interesting story :)

not usually a big fan of vore...

Is Paul part snake? Don't see how he could eat a human arm whole. But still cool story.

I don't understand why there are so many reviews calling you sick for writing this. I mean, c'mon, you clearly warned us beforehand that it was going to be disturbing.

That being said, HOLY FUCK THIS SHIT WAS DISTURBING. You did your job and you did it damn well here. I am thoroughly creeped out after reading this.

Also, as a side note, this is why I don't ship AshxPaul, because this is always how I pictured Paul.

*gulp* OMG that was gruesome! i like but soo gruesome

That was disturbing. Well written but disturbing. I liked butam kinda in shock. Excuse me.

ok you have major issues and have given me fears of what my boyfriend would do to me if i broke up with him nightmares tonight ps you need to see a therapist

Wow,that is dark... I don't think Ash will ever think about doing something like that again. NEVER run from Paul, he will hunt you down! ;) Good work!

...This is so fucked up, man. XD

It was highly disturbing, which is a good theme, but all the gore kind of took the fear away. But I think ya got your point across:

Never break up with Paul.

Well, this is fucked up man.

Ok...I only have to say one thing... you are SICK AND TWISTED... I love that about you! Honestly one of the creepiest things I've ever read. The ending made me shudder. You can make a horror movie lol

Omg this story was soo Awsome. Paul now scares me more than before. Loved the creeepy ending too it gave me chills.

Ahh, sadistic Paul! Love the sheer madness of all this! I have a weird obsession with macabre now, so this was definitely a treat to read. I am seriously in love with your writing style. It's all so descriptive without being too descriptive, and just so...so lovely and perfect. ;A;

I really enjoyed the ending, by the way. 8D I used to sing that song all the time as a kid!

MM

OMG I loved it! and I loved the 'You Are My Sunshine' at the end. I can just picture it! sorry, I'm a little twisted ;)

love it -

awesome story dude.