I love this story but way did u stop. Keep updating!

-gasp-

is all i can say!

I love this story! Shirosaki is awesome :3

update soon?

-Young

FUN!

THUMBS UP

Awesome!

Well written action parts, and a little bit of grammar problems, but we're all human.

For the first chapter it was pretty darn good.

Congrats.

But there was just two simple mistakes.

First when it said this:

"Again, that thing again. I couldn't protect her, or Chad. If I can't even protect them, who can I save? Dammit!" Ichigo slammed his fist again the glass window in anger.

Instead of saying "his fist again the glass wall"

You should place "against" instead.

Second

When you wrote this:

I'll swallow you tell you go insane and begin to destroy everything thing in sight, like me. Then, you'll disappear'

You wrote "tell" instead of "till".

As I've said, excellent work.

I'll be reviewing the rest soon. :D

its seems not seams

LOOK LOOK LOOK! I READED IT! -

omg i love shiro! hes so amazing! x)

ttyl!

one question what was the crossover between I got the bleach part but what was it being crossed with

interesting

shiro kicks ASS!

lol, no WAY grimmi is going to beat him! XD

It. Was. FANTASTIC!

please dont take as long to write the next chapter!

Awesome story so far for your first time :D . I could really get into this XD.

EEP! i actually squealed! can you believe that? I SQUEALED!

that means that this is such an exciting story and i MUST HAVE MORE!