This was oh-so beautiful...the song set the tone for the entire piece, and I LOVE that song, and it was deep and not at all contrived like so many stories in this particular vein can be. I loved the humor and that they were still themselves, it's so funny, the image that sticks with me on that note is Kendall with the bag strap across his forehead. That was a very...real...touch. And also, props for making the mugging seem like such random chance. It really sunk the whole piece in this crazy realistic 'this could actually happen' place. One more bit I love love loved is that, in most fanfiction, when the characters say I love you, it can be so cheesy or forced...but this was so very fitting. I'm raving, I loved this so much. Amazing work! XoXo- Atticus

Damnn you are seriously one of my favorite people right now :)

This was amazing!

This one of the best BTR stories I have ever read. The dialogue is simple but effective. Everything really just seemed to flow and fit well. You did a wonderful job writing this. It's amazing.

-8ami

This story made me just...mesmerized. I loved it. Period.

Don't be self conscious. This was good.

I have a confession to make... I love all your storys... All of them

Never have written a review until now. This is the closest thing to a professional writer that I have read so far on this site. Of course, I like the characters mostly because they ring true. And I must admit, I like the Logan/Kendall pairing the best!

I also like the fact that you are not afraid to use language that is not simplistic. I like it when a writer does not speak to the lowest common denominator, as many of these stories tend to do.

If you keep writing like this, it will be a pleasure to discover what awaits Logan and Kendall. And the other guys as well.

man, that was AMAZING!

the dialogue and actions and explanations were all perfect, and the plot was good, if slightly overused

This kind of stuff really is not my cup of tea. But your intriguing summary made me HAVE to read this, and I have to say I am pleasantly surprised. The writing was pretty amazing and I couldn't help but get giggly over the entirety of it. And I am not one for slash (not a homophobe either, but if the connection isn't made in cannon, I have a hard time picturing it otherwise). You did a great job, be proud. I hope to see more of this kind of work from you!

.this.

I really liked it. You did a great job on it.

ohmigosh this was absolutly AMAZING! best kogan story i ever read! please write more :p

This was pretty good but I considered it HWP- hurt without plot. You should totally make a sequel, or prequel even, with details of what happened to Logan. Although, it was a bit too fast paced and felt like it left a lot out. Otherwise, 'was great!

Keep it up.

this was a really great story! it was really well written and warmed my little heat!

POOR LOGIE! I LUFFLES THIS STORY! IT WAS TOTALLY KAWAII!