Two words. SPEECH MARKS!! Where are they?

Geez , cant you use " " like every other writer in the world ?

I like this take charge Ron. Telling the twins what to do... Brilliant.

Oh. Nice what Ron did linking their minds together. Ron still probably needs to produce a Patronus soon it looks like. :)

oh, how happy!

For a second there, I thought it was Ron/Harry... cuz it was R/H instead of R/Hr. You should fix that. Nonetheless, good story!

A very nice story. I really enjoyed reading it

Oh, freaky. This is getting good. =D

This is getting even better! =D

Valeria is one of the best written OC I have ever encountered in the HP fandom. Her introduction wasn't as awkward as most are and the plot progresses ever on... xD

I'm loving this story already, but since it's you who's written, it's not really all that surprising. Harry and Ron's use of wit against Malfoy is perfect and the plot is very intiguing. Definitely worth continuing and a fave. =D

I just read this through all the way... Amazing... absolutely amazing. I love how you described the connection Ron had with every character and how it ultimately made everyone stronger.


Cheers!

Hi!
I'm sorry I'm only reviewing on the last chapter...but I read the story all in one go and didn't want to stop! Thank you so much for writing this, your flow and characterisation were fantastic. I've always been a d/g shipper, but you brought me back to canon. I adore your Ron, now I'm off to see if you've written anything else...

Katie

Wow, I'm really enjoying this. You have a cool, well-realized OC, one who, while possessing nifty powers, also suffers from the downside of such powers. Interesting - she's like Harry's mirror in a way, seemingly having survived Avada Kedavra and gained some powers because of her survival.

Ron's infatuation with Hermione is, for once, not taken for granted here, and I can't thank you enough for that. You really seem to have thought out how they'd go about resolving their romantic tension instead of simply assuming that eventually they'll snog and get it over with. Moreover, anyone who thoughtfully explores Ronald Weasley in general gets a thumbs-up in my books.

Mostly, however, I'm using this review to mark my place so I can come back later. Impressive so far!

-Kirinin

well i just wanted t tell you that i like your story so far and that i didnt completely finish this chapter but i needed to add you so i thought i would just comment on it