yeah i was hoping that katie will have some time to forgive jessie.. but anyway it's cool it just show that how katie loves jessie so much that she can easily forgive her..umm i'm kinda expecting that u'll update this .. and a twist or some changes would be great.. thank you,. and btw ur great and awesome dude! :D

This one I didn't really like :( sorry. I just thought Katie was too quick to forgive Jessie. To me faking a death just seems unforgivable lol

well this seems pretty good so far! :D the whole "faking her own death" thing was admitted a bit extreme, and not highly probable but a pretty good twist, if a bit cruel.

which was recognized which is good lol. :)

it's nice that you're giving them a second chance. ;) i know that you like to try and end your stories on more realistic and less happy notes, but sometimes a happy ending or even possibility for one isn't so bad. ;)

nice story!u need to make more chapters than this!:D