|Reviews for Telos|
| Trife 4/29/12 . chapter 16
Good update. First off I wish to say good luck on finals, I know how they are.
Second of all I truly hope what those two stupid girls did comes to light for how many students got killed in the opening salvo and any that are to come because of their betrayel. Will make an interesting couple of paragraphs at least if not more with all the reactions, consequences, etc that will happen for what they did.
Please update soon if possible I want to see how this plays out!
| Immortalis Cruor Elf 4/29/12 . chapter 16
| evelsaint93 4/29/12 . chapter 16
Oh man, that girl is so dumb. At least naruto is awake.
| birningice 4/29/12 . chapter 16
Ahh! He is finally awake! Now he can kick A**! _
So sad that I have to wait another month... :'( But as a fellow student, I understand... :/
| Beloved Daughter 4/29/12 . chapter 16
Things are about to get very... interesting. Hehehehe.
| J.F.C 4/29/12 . chapter 16
Awesome chap, hope you update soon.
| pikabuu 4/27/12 . chapter 15
Amazing! Love this story, especially where only parts of Naruto's memories are returning scattered across a couple chapters, can't wait for the next chapter
| pkp033 4/25/12 . chapter 15
I had the e-mail notification for this chapter sitting in my inbox for some time now, I finally got around to read the update. I'm very pleased with the progress your story has been showing and there are a few things I wanted to point out:
1) I'm enjoying the resistance the students/staff of Hogwarts are displaying against the Shinobi.
2) I like how Rose sided with Jill in opposition of James and Al. Hermione was a character that never put zero to very little stock in things like prophesy/clairvoyance, ONLY gambling on her INTUITION based on things she KNOWS or LEARNED. In this scene, we see Hermione's genes in Rose, not willing to gamble on something that can't be proved beyond a shadow of a doubt.
3) I like the intensity and sense of urgency with the situation of James and his injury.
4) I also like the introduction of Theodosia Nott, she seems to be a complete wild card...I can't wait to see what she's going to do next.
5) Looking forward to see the Shinobi fight!
Hope to read another update in the near future!
| Kairi.1101 4/15/12 . chapter 15
I really like this. It's so *different* from every other HP/Naruto crossover! Instead of sending in a shinobi to act as a bodyguard for Harry, it's an accidental-crossover-war. Love how you're incorporating elements of both world, and not making one vastly superior to the other.
| mac-ii 4/13/12 . chapter 15
You said two weeks and i was like ok come back two weeks later not there and still i was like cool sick or something come back a couple weeks later and still not there and my soul broke but ill still wait but you should hurry.
| Zanzibar1 3/28/12 . chapter 15
I'm really enjoying this story as it has drawn me in and kept me entranced throughout. All the mysteries giving this story even more of an edge to hook me in with. I'm looking forward to more chapters so please update soon!
| vampyregirl256 3/18/12 . chapter 15
UPDATE! This is like the best HP/Naruto crossover EVER! One question, Naruto mastered the kyuubis power when he almost/ did kill sasuke right? please do tell. Cant wait for the next chapter
| Tanpopo97 3/17/12 . chapter 15
Gaaaaah i cant wait for naruto to wake up
| Chianina 3/9/12 . chapter 15
Love it, and I want mooooooooore! :D I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and hope to see Naruto kicking ass! :D
| mack 2/29/12 . chapter 15
what the eff! i really, really want Naruto to wake up! man, this is really killin me, the suspense is too much! just save the hogwarts brats and get to justice hammerin! lol, i love love love this story and i hope the next update come soon! i look forward to more suspense and sitting on the edge of my seat!