Finally got around to reading this today. This was definitely a different and unique take on Sheridan's last days with his wife. You have a very interesting style of writing. The way you formulated this story is very similar to the way you wrote the Shan'Fal story. You write in short, bit-sized pieces, moving quickly without a breath in between. Nicely done, especially the secrets they harbored for far too long.

Moving and beautiful. Well done and thank you.

Thank you for such a well crafted story. It was to the point, excellent images that pulled this reader in to the poignant last few nights of this sweet love story. This is one of the better B5 fanfic pieces that I have read in a long while. More! More!

Oh...very pretty, and so, so sad! You did a good job at this. I could really connect with both John and Delenn and their feelings during this time.

This was a heart breaking story- I can understand why someone would want to push away those they love from the pain while still clinging to them. This was a great story.