The love and quiteness of this strory are great. It fills in a missing chapter of the original series.

Very well written. It shows thoughtfulness and creativity. We all know Black will have to retire, and your version is one of my favorites.

I've read all your black stallions ones and I love them! I was wondering if you could write some more, maybe one that show's Alec's and Pam's kids? "]

I simply adore your stories :p

More please. Well written, free of the usual mistakes, seeming to be heading in an intersting direction. Am hoping that it's not just a one page story.

Wow, that was lovely and so poignant and heartbreakingly true. You so perfectly captured those feelings and uncertainties we all experience when we enter the start starting gate, as well as that strong desire to hold onto something that is fleeting. Excellent, and well done indeed.