All I can say is: Thank you ever so much for writing this. I have to agree 100% with your view on the last books. I like Tahl as a character, but I absolutely did not like the random romance thrown in with her and Qui-Gon. I especially did not like how unnecessarily tense and strained it made his and Obi-Wan's relationship. I enjoyed all the books until that little sub-plot became a main focus. [/rant oh I'm so sorry]

As for your story, all I can say is that it's one of my favorites. I love how you wrote it, whether they were a bit out of character or not. I'm not a huge fan of first-person stories, but this one really stood out to me. I loved it. Amazing job! :D

Kyuuketsuki_Nekko

I love it! This is one of those stories where you read it, and it's like the author put emotion into it! I actually cried. You are a great author!

Great story! Keep up the good work:)

Whatever gods graced you with the ability to make people cry must have also conveniently forgotten to give me at least some immunity to it. You're the only person I know who has written so many pieces of work that can make my tears fall through the entirety of them. I liked this, despite how Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are out of character. It was a good idea, and very well-written, naturally.

Umbrae

This was an absolutely beautiful piece. Thank you for letting me read it. It was wonderful.

wow this has to be the most amazing Obi-Wan Gui-Gon story i have EVER read, i was practically crying when i read it, awsome job and i hope to see more from you -

hehe...Hi! I know this is old...and I'd like to comment on all your stuff! if you want, I will But this is my FAVORITE story! I lovers it! the angst of it all! ok..I'm done. *squele* ok really I'm done. I love how you make that Father/son connection without it being a..."love" story (if ya know what I mean) thanks for making great fiction.

That was so sweet! Poor Obi-Wan. Glad they talked it out!

This is so sweet. It has to be one of my all time favourite stories...

Nelarun of Australia

AH HOW SWEET :D THAT'S SO DAMNED SWEET

aw, that was so sweet. i really like sweet obi/qui 'fics' i really hope to see more from you

This is one of my fav stories. I try not to cry every time I read it. ;) Good work!

Sweet! It's so nice to find a fic where two men are friends and can hug and comfort each ither without it being a slash. This is cool.

Aww, I just love this kind of mush. I love your work, and I like reading these short stories, but could you please work more on "Shrouded by Darkness?" Thanks.

-Atheilen.

I've read a lot of ure stories, and i really love all of them.

Please keep on writing.