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FalseExact
2007-05-27 . chapter 24
Amazing story, is this dead, if so it's a shame
WillItWork
2005-12-25 . chapter 24
It's great that someone isn't desperate to see a happy ever after for everyone. I really liked this, although some of the chapter numbers are off. Maybe it just seems that way from the chronology? Even now, the post-war chronicle in the first arc seems a little broken.

Afterwards, it's more of same, with great fights (you do very good fight scenes!) and a return to the status quo of the past generation. I almost wish you had let Ranma die! It certainly would have been a change, and I am afraid he is getting close to godmode (or at least Orochi mode- there's an idea) although contrary to many other fics, at least he's earned it, and suffers for the burden. This is a Good Thing. This Ranma isn't very cocky.

The AU Kiima works well, but it's sometimes difficult tracking who has their wings when and why. Like I though Kiima got her curse cured? She got a new one? How does she disappear her wings? What about Karmine?

Final analysis: not as good as DPNR (but then I like SNKWorld) but much better than BGE. It's also a pure Ranma fic, which is nice.
dennisud
2005-11-25 . chapter 23
Well You answered my questions on What had happened in Nerima after the evvents of the Anamzon war.
This latest change with Ranma mending himself was familir so we;ll see where this goes and What of Mousse and will Taro and Par-Fum visit as well?

Great so far!

dennisud
dennisud
2005-11-25 . chapter 15
Nicely done. I liked tha tendos here unlike those in your other fics. But I think you picked the right ones to do battle here.
Now lets see what these extra chapters are all about!

dennisud
Virosa
2005-08-25 . chapter 23
nice that was almost the best story i have read.
JohnnyG
2005-07-18 . chapter 23
Enjoyable story. Keep up the good work.

Best,
~JohnnyG
Hiryo
2005-07-03 . chapter 23
WOW! That was a very aawing chapter. As always! :D You had me reall with Ranma being dead! Hmm now I simply have to see the rivals Ranma will get now... COOLIO! Gotta have to see were you will go with this fic as soon as possible!
vedmid
2005-06-30 . chapter 23
huh

Part of me is suprised to see Ranma back, part of me isn't... Primairly after the various stories you've written I hadn't expected to see ayone come back from death. Not that I'm complaining... especially since it you've said there willbe explanation.

As per the norm, I'll watch for the next chapter
migele
2005-06-30 . chapter 23
To answer your question, yes.
The second arc is home of the next generation so Yes I thought that removing the old generation would be fun.

am I wrong or are the chapters coming out faster than before?
The DCG
2005-06-30 . chapter 23
You had a chance to kill off the kuno's and you didnt?

why!!
John Tannius
2005-06-29 . chapter 23
Great follow through from last chapter! Beautiful writing! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! But the chapters are still TOO DAMN SHORT! I wanna read more!

As always, waiting faithfully for your next chapter...
Wonderbee31
2005-06-29 . chapter 23
Wow, this was a fantastic part here and the end of this chapter has me waiting for more! If a little thing like death won't stop Ranma, then I'd say the dynamic has just went on a 90 degree course to...somewhere else. Glad to see that Ranma still retains enough to know that his wife and family need him more than his current battle, but I have a feeling that the Kuno's had better watch out for themselves now, as Ranma will not hold back anymore.
dai
2005-06-29 . chapter 23
Beautiful, I loved this chapter. A bit too fast but good none the less.

Update soon.
Maschbot
2005-06-19 . chapter 22
Well, that... sucks. Completely pointless and out of the blue. If this is the sort of thing you have to resort to for plot twists now, I'm disappointed. I know you're a good writer; I've been following most of your stories for over a year now. This seems like a really crappy cop out.
DoWnEr
2005-06-17 . chapter 22
... gotta say... thats pretty ** up... i can understand having Ranma hurt bad... but losing his arm... that a lil to much... i don't mind Ranma suffering.. its just.. in this fic i think he suffered enough...
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