 FalseExact 2007-05-27 . chapter 24Amazing story, is this dead, if so it's a shame |
 WillItWork 2005-12-25 . chapter 24It's great that someone isn't desperate to see a happy ever after for everyone. I really liked this, although some of the chapter numbers are off. Maybe it just seems that way from the chronology? Even now, the post-war chronicle in the first arc seems a little broken.
Afterwards, it's more of same, with great fights (you do very good fight scenes!) and a return to the status quo of the past generation. I almost wish you had let Ranma die! It certainly would have been a change, and I am afraid he is getting close to godmode (or at least Orochi mode- there's an idea) although contrary to many other fics, at least he's earned it, and suffers for the burden. This is a Good Thing. This Ranma isn't very cocky.
The AU Kiima works well, but it's sometimes difficult tracking who has their wings when and why. Like I though Kiima got her curse cured? She got a new one? How does she disappear her wings? What about Karmine?
Final analysis: not as good as DPNR (but then I like SNKWorld) but much better than BGE. It's also a pure Ranma fic, which is nice. |
 dennisud 2005-11-25 . chapter 23Well You answered my questions on What had happened in Nerima after the evvents of the Anamzon war.
This latest change with Ranma mending himself was familir so we;ll see where this goes and What of Mousse and will Taro and Par-Fum visit as well?
Great so far!
dennisud |
 dennisud 2005-11-25 . chapter 15Nicely done. I liked tha tendos here unlike those in your other fics. But I think you picked the right ones to do battle here.
Now lets see what these extra chapters are all about!
dennisud |
 Virosa 2005-08-25 . chapter 23nice that was almost the best story i have read. |
 JohnnyG 2005-07-18 . chapter 23Enjoyable story. Keep up the good work.
Best,
~JohnnyG |
 Hiryo 2005-07-03 . chapter 23WOW! That was a very aawing chapter. As always! :D You had me reall with Ranma being dead! Hmm now I simply have to see the rivals Ranma will get now... COOLIO! Gotta have to see were you will go with this fic as soon as possible! |
 vedmid 2005-06-30 . chapter 23huh
Part of me is suprised to see Ranma back, part of me isn't... Primairly after the various stories you've written I hadn't expected to see ayone come back from death. Not that I'm complaining... especially since it you've said there willbe explanation.
As per the norm, I'll watch for the next chapter |
 migele 2005-06-30 . chapter 23To answer your question, yes.
The second arc is home of the next generation so Yes I thought that removing the old generation would be fun.
am I wrong or are the chapters coming out faster than before? |
 The DCG 2005-06-30 . chapter 23You had a chance to kill off the kuno's and you didnt?
why!! |
 John Tannius 2005-06-29 . chapter 23Great follow through from last chapter! Beautiful writing! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! But the chapters are still TOO DAMN SHORT! I wanna read more!
As always, waiting faithfully for your next chapter... |
 Wonderbee31 2005-06-29 . chapter 23Wow, this was a fantastic part here and the end of this chapter has me waiting for more! If a little thing like death won't stop Ranma, then I'd say the dynamic has just went on a 90 degree course to...somewhere else. Glad to see that Ranma still retains enough to know that his wife and family need him more than his current battle, but I have a feeling that the Kuno's had better watch out for themselves now, as Ranma will not hold back anymore. |
 dai 2005-06-29 . chapter 23 Beautiful, I loved this chapter. A bit too fast but good none the less.
Update soon. |
 Maschbot 2005-06-19 . chapter 22 Well, that... sucks. Completely pointless and out of the blue. If this is the sort of thing you have to resort to for plot twists now, I'm disappointed. I know you're a good writer; I've been following most of your stories for over a year now. This seems like a really crappy cop out. |
 DoWnEr 2005-06-17 . chapter 22 ... gotta say... thats pretty ** up... i can understand having Ranma hurt bad... but losing his arm... that a lil to much... i don't mind Ranma suffering.. its just.. in this fic i think he suffered enough... |