   kittytrypsin 4/1/12 . chapter 1What a great story. You've captured the Stark snark perfectly, I can almost hear his lines being spoken by RDjr. More Iron Man from you, please.
Kitty . |
| Deadpool-rules 1/1/11 . chapter 1 Fantastic story ! |
| Cerasi5 12/25/10 . chapter 1 So sickeningly beautiful! I love the way you write Tony and Pepper. Their voices are pitch-perfect and your style is simply powerful. Thanks for a wonderful read! |
| xheartkreuzx 10/10/10 . chapter 1 loved it! |
| Voldemort's Spawn 6/13/10 . chapter 1 Wow this was very well written. Great detail and an awesome story! Very awesome. |
| Crimson Masquerade 5/23/10 . chapter 1 So wonderful! You write pepperony so so well! I loved theIr awkward yet sweet new relationship. |
| Dance Elle Dance 5/22/10 . chapter 1 I loved this! You did an amazing job with this. It was so well written and such a pleasure to read. Keep up the great work! :) |
| swallowingacloud 5/22/10 . chapter 1 This is awesome! Please write more :) |
| fox4mel 5/21/10 . chapter 1 Beautifully written - I loved every paragraph!
This type of scene has been writting over and over again, but you really put some new life into it and the difference was in the details! |
| mustangwoman 5/20/10 . chapter 1 WOW! I'm hooked! I started reading this while at work and had a difficult time waiting until I got home to finish it. |
| MissHaunted-MoonLight 5/20/10 . chapter 1 Wow, what a stunning story. Your characterisation is spot on and the plot is just perfect. Tony's witty humour despite his situation accompanied by Pepper's frustrated acceptance that these things are bound to happen ... yup, all fabulously done. 20 / 10 !
I've loved reading this one, so thanks so much for sharing it with us! Hope you keep writing gems like this! :D
Blessed Be,
Mogwai x X x |
| Naga 5/20/10 . chapter 1 That's beautiful. You have Tony's sarcasm and glib tongue,and Pepper's brisk efficiency very well. |
| writingmonkey10 5/20/10 . chapter 1 WOW! This was brilliant! :) Everyone was totally and completely in character and I could see everyone saying everything (which does not happen that often when reading FF, let me tell you). Dang, you can write pretty damn well! Really, this was all great! :) |
| AnnaTW 5/20/10 . chapter 1 . Pure brilliance, well done :) HAPPY WRITING, AnnaTW |
| Aynessa 5/20/10 . chapter 1 LOVE! I absolutely *adored* the wit you gave Tony, it fit with his character so amazingly well. So many Iron Man fics forget to give Tony that ridiculous in-your-face-even-if-I'm-half-dead snark he always displays, and I'm so happy to have found one that does that. Beautiful. And I so loved the little insights into Tony and Pepper's head.
You make me wish this wasn't a one-shot. :3 |
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