   Mrs.Radke-Cifer 9/21/10 . chapter 2oi! its been more than a month! are you still making this er shood i delete it? i keep waitin fr an update and im not the most patient person... |
| DemonicBallerina 9/12/10 . chapter 3 I really, really like this fic. It's wonderfully written and it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into it. You've portrayed the characters so well, and the diologue is just great.
I'm excited to see where this story is going and I'm looking forward to more Zero/Yuki interaction. Even if it's not romantic for a while, this is so well written, I'm sure it will be a pleasure to read. |
| Mrs.Radke-Cifer 9/2/10 . chapter 3 r u still writing this story? |
| French 8/26/10 . chapter 1 Hey everyone! This is French from Miniflip999's story The Great Fictional Character War! If you believe this anime is the best, join my team in defeating Mini! Just comment you are on my team on her story if you love this anime! Please help me! I am loosing to the Bleach fans, and I need help! Help, and I'll give each of you each special recognition in my chapters in the story! Thank you! |
| Poor Alice 8/26/10 . chapter 3 WAAAAAHHHHH ! Make them love each other already ! :D |
| anon 8/24/10 . chapter 1 Am so happy you updated:D i have been waiting awhile for to update. Please keep on updating your story. |
| J.H.E 7/16/10 . chapter 1 Interesting story line.
Can't wait to read more.
Update Soon! |
| anon 7/13/10 . chapter 2 Please Continue:-)
Interesting Story! |
| DeathIsOnlyTheBeginin 6/21/10 . chapter 2 I love watching them feud. It's good fun. Brilliant dialogue by the way - simply stunning. I'm excited to read more! |
| ILoveVampires96 5/31/10 . chapter 1 this is pretty beast |
| Starriecat 5/23/10 . chapter 1 Sounds interesting, and well-written so far! Keeping on an eye out on this one :) |
| xDD 5/21/10 . chapter 1 I'm a Kaname x Yuuki fan, but this story's summary was interesting enough to get me to read it. (Yours is the first Zeki story that I actually liked.) So here I am. I like how you expressed Yuuki's grief and insecurities. Update soon! |
| TESKATLIPOKA 5/20/10 . chapter 1 I think its good as far as It goes. Hope you keep up the good work. With regrdas, TESKATLIPOKA. |
| Anonymiss 5/20/10 . chapter 1 This is a great great great portrayal of grief. Ah-mazing. i like the way you addressed Zero's appearance, too. Once I heard that his hair had gone white with shock, but I like your's better, where you don't even pretend it's normal.
Again, it is lovely, and I am praying for a plot bunny to bite you! |
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