Well that was interesting

I flinched, because I love Ryouga.

oh, THANK YOU!
I love Kuno (the boy Tawaki (?)) and I hate it when authors do nohting but bash him! I love him and I love that you gave him some light.

Good stuff, i especially like your writing style, always pulling in your readers in for more, watning to know the answers to questions and so forth. Even though I'm only passingly familiar with the KoF universe I find the characters more believable and find myself concerned for them. You have fine skills and should be comended.

Man, what a cliffhanger.

hey man,

are you ever gonna update this fanfic?

you definately need to continue this story i especially love the way you made ranma be like geese howard

You should really update this story

Not bad but as it progressed I really grew to dislike this 'mature Ranma' if you can call his arrogant, obnoxious, overbearing and hypocritical attitude 'mature'. With the girls he never even tried to deal with them earlier even though the possibility was there his family might be in danger? Why does he want to provoke something with an obviously distraught Ukyo? From their encounter it looked more like he was angling for a fight.

And Kasumi Todo head of the dojo? Why did Ranma step on her toes when dealing with Mr. Kuonji? That to me implies not a lot of respect and even more hypocrisy. Though tell you what I think he was right about Mr. Kuonji who couldn't be bothered to deal with things himself nor even go after or blame the real guilty party which was Genma and NOT Ranma.

Mind you he was absolutely dead on about the things he said to Soun, a cowardly joke of a man who can't really be bothered to look after his own daughters and instead have them look after him even using his wifes death as an excuse. Not to mention he couldn't properly raise Akane I mean there is only so much his eldest daughter Kasumi can do. If you think about it the arranged marriage between Ranma and Akane plus the 'Unite the schools' business really has no relevance.

Sorry but the Ranma you've created is just an obnoxious little snot in my eyes and you might want to tone down that attitude of his a little as I've stated there were quite a few incidents he really got on my nerves.

this is an awesome story
but you keep using brake instead of break.

break is when something becomes broken.
brake is an action that is used to slow down

Very Enjoyable.

This thing is really OOC. Genma and Soun weren't anything like what you have portrayed and your version of Ranma is nothing but a worthless little snot.

I really liked this one, I would normally throw in some comment about how great it is, but its only my second Ranma-Kof piece, so I don’t have much to compare it to, and I don’t think its fair to compare it solely to Yagami 1/2, they are to different. keep up the good work, Ciao

Brilliant story. I am not familiar with King of Fighters but this does not detract from this excelent tale. I hope you continue because apart from the outcome of this new tornament I would like to know how Ranma return with the others.

The fight scenes are amazingly detailed and a very entertaining story, please continue.

Ok first I'm not familiar with all the fihters in KOF.
And I can understand your statements on the NWC being too weak and so won't stand much of a chance with the KOF fighters.
Also I see this is an A/U and will keep that in mind
overall and exiting and very entertaining story, I hope you update soon.

But I have two issues with two characters.
Kasumi Tendo is IMHO the bedrock of the fragility that is the Tendo home. Yes she is one that IMHO hides much from the others but I think she'd realise even before nabiki the situation with Akane's bratness and the father's insane plans to get Ranma. I would have gotten her away from them, maybe to live with Nodoka and the blow up at the Tendo's Dojo would have happened much earlier.
BTW Kudos on straightening Kuno out.
The second problem is The shafting of Nodoka And her happiness at her son's action tainted with the realization of honor bound duty.
I think Genma needs to release her from those honor bound duties and allow her the chance to be a mother and not a concubine which IS what Genma used her for.

Ok enough for that I think the pairing were well done, but I think Kasumi Tojo though a very good ACC could have been superceded by either nabiki, or kasumi had his travel to the other world happened at the Tendo home.

Hope you update soon.

dennisud