|Reviews for Spirit of Omicron|
| karnivallo 12/21/10 . chapter 4
Damn, never mind, he was an OC...by the way, the Sisters are one, weird creeps...
| karnivallo 12/21/10 . chapter 2
Oh, so they weren't twins, huh. By the way, is Oliver Weston a main character created by you, or an OC rival created by someone else? It might've been good to include him in the OC Forms if he was created by you. LOL, the forums are like some sort of a 'behind the scenes' stuff of your stories, huh? I keep spotting the Harry Potter references here and there. Couldn't help but have a skim over when I was urged to read the books again...
| karnivallo 12/18/10 . chapter 5
Now I love this story better than the Louhearts Expidition. I tend to dislike familiar settings in story, or familiar plots, so this whole-new-world thing hits my tastes just right. The description of the city gives the whole world a refined, futuristic setting where mankind has succeeded in evening out and intermingling modernization and nature perfectly, and although the Harry Potter influence is still there (though it really is partly inevitable with these academy-set stories), I'm loving the feel of this story.
The rivals, the French twins, seemed to be vain prissies from the start, but it's good that you're making well rounded rivals for once, and it I like how you made Tin-man a well rounded character, too (has an admirermight become softer and more accepting in the future, or might just remain a jerk and reject her feelings). He's just heartless, heh.
It's not against going against the rules of your stories to give OCs for each of your stories, is it? Not that I'm going to, only LE and SoO.
Dab of comedy here and there, main character wet herself at the start of the story, and is a horrible speller. XD
| Nirazilaa 8/8/10 . chapter 5
Great job with this chapter. Character development was evident in this, so the wait wasn't something that really detracted from it. Awesome job as always.
| xXKaminari-TsubasaXx 8/8/10 . chapter 5
Sierra and Leon are friends with Desiree now, but I wonder how long it'll last...
Danica seems...perky :) I like her
| Zaru 8/8/10 . chapter 5
Nice chapter, I hope that some love gets to the Omegas dispite the evil queen bitch ruling it. Can't wait for more.
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 8/8/10 . chapter 5
That was an awesome chapter but it seemed short to me... I mean I was just getting into it and all excited for them to head to the Equator and then it ended so abruptly so now I want more. But I also want more Louhearst and more Gangs and more everything so... I don't know, I'm being really needy aren't I?
Oh well, this was great. Update again as soon as you can.
| Pikana 8/8/10 . chapter 5
YAY for the update! And today, we learn that the characters we hate so far anren;t total meanies! YAY CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! Hehehe. It was a good-short-chapter and I'm so happy you are out of the writer's block!
| trex abby 8/8/10 . chapter 5
This was good Lolli but was bit of a slow update but that can't be helped. I sense a triple C's like Louhearst's triple M's. Do you have a thing for triple letters?
| Lururi 6/6/10 . chapter 4
The Sisters make me think of the three fairies from Sleeping Beauty for some reason...
| Kelly of the midnight dawn 5/31/10 . chapter 4
Great chapter. I loved the selection process for groups. It has just the right amount of mystisism to it. You got a lot of OCs in there :) even if most of them were just by name it was still AWESOME! See, I promised you a longer review and even though I'm on a borrowed computer for now, I still deliver :)
I can't wait for another update. Although since me being online is a rare thing for the next few day, I suppose I can.
| Nirazilaa 5/31/10 . chapter 4
The sisters had a sort of creepy edge to them in this chapter. Well, they're supposed to be, I suppose, if they're wearing creepy cloaks. It helps to make the new students happy, too.
I'm guessing Sierra's looking at Malicia and her minions. Scary.
Anyways, this was a cool sorting chapter. I hope Sierra isn't assaulted by Malicia too quickly for staring.
| RARavary 5/29/10 . chapter 4
Good chapter, and nice way of determining the groups. It doesn't help that i have been watching Harry Potter all day and immediatly thought of the sorting hat.
| Pikana 5/29/10 . chapter 4
I had to read this like three times to get it. But when I did it was really awesome and brilliantly described! i can't wait to see each of these characters broken down and examined in ya upcoming chapters! I hope you update soon Loli because I am 1000% satisfied and wanting more!
| xXKaminari-TsubasaXx 5/29/10 . chapter 4
I loved the aura idea and how it decided what group the characters were placed into. The way you described it was really cool :P