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X-chan 7/19/11 . chapter 1
Wow, It would take me at least three days to write something 1/6 as good as this...you should continue this kind of writing and maybe a third part to this? Just saying. Ciao ciao
orsiisrom 5/8/11 . chapter 1
Thant was a perfect continuum for the story! I love how Tsuna said "I… I want a remedial class!" it was the best!1 :)

By the way I read the story twice before I reviewed.
violetkisses 3/16/11 . chapter 1
awww, really cutee!
Lireach 5/30/10 . chapter 1
Not as satisfying to me as 'Lesson', but not disappointing. Then again, this is a sequel, and rarely are sequels as good or better than their predecessor... That being said, I kind of want Tsuna completely molested by Hibari. Your writing style is so much... Better than many of the 'M' writers out there, with decent spelling and punctuation, and your plot makes sense. Proof of how much I enjoyed this story is the fact that almost none of my reviews are this long, and I'm also on my cellphone, painstakingly writing this out.
aiden-sneezes 5/28/10 . chapter 1
Gwah! That was just, wow! Thanks so much for the sequel! Enjoyed it! 8DDDDDDDDDDDDD
Paradoxismminant 5/27/10 . chapter 1
Heh heh...the game of loooove.

I loved it.
Crispy Rice 5/25/10 . chapter 1
OMG, that was steaming.

I like the ending, shows Hibari

isn't COMPLETELY all hormones and

wants to break Tsuna into the bed.

Self-control! Now I am left wanting

more.
Kirisaki Hisoka 5/22/10 . chapter 1
Hohoho. 2 words. GOOD JOB. *faint due massive nosebleed*
Koolkass 5/21/10 . chapter 1
Sequel, yay! :D

I loved lessons, and I live this one, too!

I'll wait until you're ready, then I hope to read a final (it doesn't have to be a final, you can write as much as you want!) with Hibari making Tsuna his 3
Queen Phantomhive 5/20/10 . chapter 1
Hibari is really sly here and I think this story is good.
usaangel509 5/20/10 . chapter 1
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I love you. I love your stories. I love this story! I loved the other story! I freaking... Just... Ugh. I just love this pairing! 1827 for liiiiiiiife! :D TYL1827 is wonderful, too! Ugh, just the thought of older Hibari ravashing the younger Tsuna... It's absolutely orgasmic! I love this story, I hope you continue to the point where hibari claims Tsuna all the way. :D you should definitely write a story with TYL 18 with little tsuna! I definitely know that I'd read it! Anyway... Yes. I love your stories.

1827
Seriyuu 5/20/10 . chapter 1
"bizarre", eh? can't say that i disagree. the other guardians will probably be horrified. *snicker* but anyway, thanks for writing a sequel! i've been waiting for one to come out since you left the prequel sorta open ended. but other than that, i really loved both of these short stories. good luck on any your future/unfinished fics! you're a great author!
HibaTsunaKuro 5/20/10 . chapter 1
When I open my mail and see that you have made a sequel I was so exited that I actually scream and let me tell you that I'm not disappointed at all! 'A different kind of lesson' is still my favorite but this sequel is just as amazing and HOT like the first one

Now you make me want to read more, so you have to take responsibility and make a sequel of the sequel xD

Hope you make more!

Kisses!
CherryFlamingo 5/20/10 . chapter 1
Hibari is such an evil genius! xDDD
TakeshiYamamoto2980 5/20/10 . chapter 1
KYAAAAAAAAAA! love it... love the part about Kyoya being hard to get... so cute... for a second there i thought Tsuna would become the seme but it changed and made him the uke which is the most common... wait a minute, if Hibari said that then it means... another sequel... yay! can't wait...
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