Really interesting and superbly well written. Keep writing

That’s really cute. That could be another part of the canon scene…..interesting…May I request a Draco/Cho humor and romance long one-shot, pleasssssseee with a cherry on top? .

hey,

great of you to enter my little challenge. Very interesting and I have to say I really enjoyed the idea of Cho and Percy

i enjoyed it, really well written.

good job(:

Aw, it was cute. I thought you kept Percy quite in character, but I couldn't see how he and Cho became friends. I thought this was very good.

Mystii

That's a very... interesting pairing. I admit that had I been given this, I would have been at total loss. Well written, and good job :)

That's indeed an unusual pairing, but I liked it :)

Oh, wow, this is fantastic! I would have been completely lost with this pairing, but you created a situation that seemed very realistic for the characters. I particularly liked it when Percy told Cho that his pride had got in the way. Until that moment, I wasn't sure whether Percy was going to be in-character or not, but that was decidedly Percy-like.

Nitpick: '"It's ok, Percy..."' - 'ok' is not the right spelling; it's written either 'OK' or 'okay'. :)

This was really quite lovely. It was a romance-that-might-have-been, and those are good to read when done right. Which this was. Cho's dislike of Balls gave her more depth, and, all in all, this was very interesting. Great job!

Cute. I loved it.

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky

That was cute. You kept Percy in character, and the parallels to show the similarities between him and Cho were effective. Good job.

This is for sure a strange pairing but I like it. I never eally liked Cho but you paired her with the perfect person to make her more likeable. Great job

Interesting idea, I've never seen this particular pairing before.

Ooo, I really like this pairing! I haven't ever read a fic about Percy/Cho but I really liked this one. Their whole previous friendship made it very believable. Good job!

:D

-Morghen

A very interesting pairing :) I really quite liked them together- very sweet!

Anyway, I really loved this- I liked that it was a friendship fic, but could easily be percieved as romance.

The last line was so PERFECT!

First, thanks for answering the challenge! I like your submission very much! You wrote them very well and you gave us their past with only some allusions it's very well done.

Also it was realistic and vivid! Great job!