This last statement was so beautiful! I wish I had someone like Larten around me.

It's a realy great story! I enjoyed it. I will keep reading it over and over again.

Both David and Darren knew how Larten can be, especially when Darren is in it. And still when he's dashing off ready to kill, they both just sit down and start to talk!? :p
From Darren I can understand, though, after he had already encountered his mentor's rage.

This was an awesomely intense chapter and I look foreword to reading more. :)

...whoa. O.O bad luck for Darren...
but yay :D updates! u

Hey so you made some error in spelling not meaning to be rude ChappyMaster

I really like your story line and are waiting for the next chapters eagerly.
Just trying to be helpful but u really need to read the stuff you write before you post it as you often use the wrong word, u keep say 'his' instead of he's ... i really hate that xD
Apart from that small thing it's Great!
Keep up the good work !

What happened to nick and red ?

Whoa...
Now I'm speechless. Why did Darren pass out? Is Paul ALWAYS this much of a jerk? haha, Well in any case, you know what I usually say.
It's A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
I cannot wait to see what happens next *waits in corner anxiously*
P-L-E-A-S-E update soon! :) I can't wait for more!
Yup. The usual. But the point still remains! haha
Cat Attack 411

i gotta say,nice done with this chapter-by far my favorite so far :)

please update soon? pretty please? haha :)

cant wait for the next one-love it love love it! hurry up and write the next one please?

ey man,this is really good,how can we not want more? and of course youre not boring us! i cant wait for more so please update soon!

from,

cat attack

aww! this story is so freaking awesome! when are you going to update? its been a few months-hurry up! ;) i really like-no i dont like it i love it! please please please continue! :DDD

from,

cat attack(aka the person who loves this fic)

plx review this story, it is awsome, and i can't wait 2 read more! :D:D:D:D