Not to be rude but you need to make the chapters longer. Then you'll have a great story.

Yes, I read all 6 chapters.

Usually, I don't like wakka/lulu fics,(actually I don't like Wakka/anybody but me fics)) But this one

was really, really good! Great Job!

NOOOOOOOOO!

SHE CAN'T HAVE HIM!

HE'S MINE!

ALL MINE!

(cakles evily)

...

Sorry about that. Got carried away.

MINE!

sorry, sorry.

I love it! Hurry with the next chapter

hmmm...good, but a little confusing. There were some grammar mistakes though. Maybe put all of the chapters together? It was kinda weird just reading a little bit, then having to go to the next chapter.

MOREE! *sniffles* Update soon!

Write more, hurry up!

Whoa! I HAVE to read what happens next! continue! Wow! Even though it's pretty sad, it touches me! Finish it!

Keep going it's a great story. Hopefully Lulu and Wakka's love is strong enough. Just because she pregnant, doesn't mean they have to stay together. But I think Wakka will stay with Lulu because he loves her, not because he feels obligated to. And I'm guessing Wakka took that page from the notebook, but if he didn't then I wonder who did

Poor Lulu. And I didn't mean your story sucked! I just was sad because you led me on!

I just love Lulu fics, so I like this one too! I hope you continue it coz I can't wait for the next one! Keep writing! )

OH NO! OH NO! DON'T DO THAT TO MY FAVORITE COUPLE! Get them back 2gether please, this fic is getting good and I still haven't found an NC-17 fic with about Lulu and Wakka, what is it/ Are people just afraid? I'm so busy, but I would write one if I had the chance! But anyway, you have to finish this ficcy! And really have me on-the-edge with the next chapter, this one made me go ::gasp:: but it's really good. You have to continue it!

You didn't bring them together! This sux!

Hmmm, needs to be longer. I love Lulu. Six (I counted them) sentences doesn't quite make a fanfic in my opinion. It started well, though. If you plan on continuing this, please do :]