Quest should fall in love

When I saw the first episode of World of Quest, I thought it was one of the stupidest shows in the world. Then I watched a couple more episodes & fell in love with the show even though I've only watched up to episode 19. My favorite character is Gatling for some reason. You should do something with a lot of him in your story. Second fav is Graer, don't know why I like him either. I know Gatling doesn't talk much, but I still like him the best. Just keep up the good work & keep on writing:)

This was very funny - but I love that you put in small moments of drama that will surely move the plot along in future chapters.

I especially love how Nestor has transformed in the year since the quest began - I really feel for him, he's been separated from his parents for so long, and he's trying to find himself as he grows into a young adult and fight the bad guys at the same time!

One suggestion I have for where to go: Nestor should totally blow up at one of his friends (maybe Anna? She's so sensitive after all...) and this affects how the gang does in a battle that comes about soon after. Okay there's my input. :)

Update as soon as you can!

I loved It. please continue.

Here is a couple ideas you can do if you want.

Spite, Ogun, and Deceit plan some attack on quest and the gang so that we can see how their characters have grown.

Nestor gets covered in liquid or slime sometime in the story(which is usually what happens to him in the show.)

If you want the story to be pretty long than have some mini quests or problems that get them sidetracked or delayed from the original quest.

-they get lost in a enchanted forest

-one of them gets sick

-They get attacked for trespassing on a creatures land

Hopefully these Ideas help get you started. :)

Yeah, this was awesome! And the show is just too corny to ignore- Even my mom loves it! Anna and Way, ARE perfect female characters too!

Well, well.. what do they need all of these items for? Some kind of potion? For trading?

I really like the angst with Nestor - I'd like to see him take a slightly more successful (though I doubt he'll ever stop embarrassing himself) role in upcoming battles. :)

Update soon!

This is good too.

YAYYYY ANOTHER FIC, AND BY SOMEONE OTHER THAN ME! AND I LOVED IT! it was so in charcter! and i love the little moments between Anna and Nestor, or atleast i hope that was a moment i read, oh well! either way you should totally keep going, i can't wait to see what you do with Lord Spite and co.!