I like this! I am very depressed that there is not a lot of stories for Balefire. Maybe, I'll write some, maybe

I love Balefire!

Anyways.

The story was good, nice description, not OOC.

However, it could've been longer.

You could've actually written the "horrifying details of how he was nearly severed in two when his motorcycle was hit by a speeding semi."

AND it could've been more dramatic.

Like Thais could've received a phone call later, saying that Luc's severely injured.

Or dead.

Though he's supposed to be like invincible, so he couldn't die.

Eh.

It's still a good story. Congrats.

That was such a remarkable story, and so believable! I loved this book, and I love this story!

i liked this short story! i absolutley LOVED Balefire! and i perferred Thais and Luc together instead of Luc and Clio, personally they were terrible together! i like Clio and Richard!

OMG! Don't you just love Balefire! What a great story!