Yes, more Senri would be nice, but it is interesting to get into the other characters' heads like you do. Update soon!

japaneserockergirl

Because you're NOT in full control, no author is. The characters write the story, we just kind of...guide them along. XD I know EXACTLY how you feel.

The "something important" Keane told him to do, was it the reminder to eat? If so, how could he forget that?

Updating both fics in a day...I'm very impressed. -nods-

Best. Anima. Story. Ever.

PLease Update this story kept me thinking even when i wasn't reading it! Keep On Righting

Wow, it was really interesting to get a view into Husky's past. And I'm seriously wondering why Keane was out there on that tire swing. Perhaps he hates his homelife as well? But I'm a bit confused with Husky's connection to Keane's family. If you could clear that up for me, I'd appreciate it. I have a guess at what it is, but I'm not a 100% sure. Update soon!

I must say, this is a brilliant story! Your style of writing is very nice, and all the characters stay in character.

I love the way you have made this AU in the story, and I can't wait for more. The only thing that bothers me is grammical mistakes such as wrong spellings and run-on sentences, but those can be easily fixed. I'd be happy to help if you'd like (I have edited before). You can transfer chapters/documents via fanfiction between users very easily.

First, you have to establish a connection with the user you're sending it to. To do this, got to the "DocX" tab once you've logged in. Then go to "Connections." Here you enter the username/penname/etc. of the user you are going to exchange documents with, then click "Create Connection." Then you have to wait until the other user does the same thing to establish a connection. Once they have connected as well, their penname will appear in the "DocX Active Connections."

Now you have to upload your chapter/document in the "Doc Manager" tab, but you MUST change the format to "DocX". After that, go back to the "DocX" tab and go to "Outbox." There you should see the docutment under "Send a Document." Now you just select your reciever and send it on to be edited. The reciever can send it back once they're done using the same process.

Hope this helps and I didn't jsut take up a lot of space for nothing "

So this is what it was like before.

Awkwardness was abundant, but really enjoyed this

nice chapter, rather sweet, and interesting. You sure do hate Dylana don't you, you make her be quite the B****; not that she isn't already...

Husky and Keane sure had quite the interesting relationship, (I must personally say I have done that opening-the-door thing, and actually with my brother)

And no wonder Keane hated Husky so much, Husky being the favorite

It'll be interesting to see these kind of chapters for the others, so far, we know more about Husky and Cooro's pasts than the other 2/3 around.

This is really an excellent story. I avoided it because I generally don't like AU stuff but I'm glad I decided to read this. The story is interesting and everyone stays in character quite well. I'm also very impressed with the length, Almost 100,000 words.

There are a significant amount of mistakes though, such as one chapter using piped instead of piqued. It's not too bad though.

Anyway I just wanted to show my appreciation. Keep it up. I'd like to see where this will go next.

this story just keeps getting better and better! also, its good to see that your getting back into the groove of writing alot and really getting inspired with the story again. try not to rush if that means the story is going to be even slightly worse, as so far you've just kept improving and improving as time goes on! I cant wait to read more and hopefully see that bonus chapter sometime soon!

Also, I did not at all expect Nana to have that sort of a thing to happen with her mom. I knew that something simmilar to that would happen, but to have her mom be the one doing it caught me off guard. Poor Nana, shes right got his from a dream while Husky and herself got them from near death experiences, it just isnt fair. That mustve been one vivid dream...

Poor Nana. I think she's coping with this situation the worst of all...

japaneserockergirl

O_O Why in the blue blazes did Nana's mother want to kill her?

It almost sounded like a suicide pact.

A-anyway, so all the Animas have shown up? Great! XD

Thanks for the speedy updates, that was a nice surprise. (But sorry I didn't get to them earlier.)

how did the others handle it so easily? ... hm... Cooro kind of expected it (and he actually wanted his wings...); Husky is mostly ignoring it (focusing in the rest of his pile of problems) in order not to break; and Senri, first, he doesn't remember, and then... well (as cruel as it sounds) he already is broken...

and Cooro didn't actually have it the easiest; sure he wasn't in real danger; but he sure enough though (and felt) he was going to die

Poor Nana; I'm pretty amazed she didn't break earlier; but she is right about their lives sure being unfair...

cool chapter

I'll be waiting to see what happens next

Pretty good. I would've thought it was her father that did something to her.

Poor, poor Nana. That must have been seriously tramatizing. I just hope Cooro can find her soon! And I found Husky's concern and his internal debate over said concern really cute. It shows that his character is changing. Update soon!

japaneserockergirl