Very nice look at Saavik's perspective. I have often wondered what a devastating effect his death had on her life. I do believe that he was a 'father figure' to her.

I have always been intrigued with this time period... of Spock's death and what happened. In fact, I have written a story dealing with this time called 'Dearest Blood'. Five chapters are already posted and I'm about to be uploading the sixth chapter in a couple days. If you get a chance, I'd like your opinion on it.

Very good job fleshing out the feelings and McCoy's sudden psychological changes. I like it. :-)

LuWanda

Very much, very much good story. Great described Saavik emotions. It is a pity that there will be no continuation.

I think this is fantastic, I love how you focus on Saavik's grief and conflict over Spock's death, it's written very interestingly. I also like the stuff about McCoy in it and how Spock's katra gradually starts to affect him.