Y ... había un fantástico Ziva a trabajar hoy...genial el fin..no habia comentado porque con la teddybear aprendi este metodo..mil felicitaciones ahorita me dedicare al del probable dengue tambien...porque reviso un poco antes porque me he llevado muchos chascos con los emparejamientos masculinos o femeninos con todos mis respetos a aquellos que les gustan esos..

I really like this story. Waited until I had read the whole thing before I commented, but this was really an intense, well-written story. You kept all the characters in line and your emotions were really believable. Great job!

Love Jen

Hi, I wanted to let you know that I love your stories. I've already read 5 or 6 of them and they are very good. My only issue is with the word "smirk" that you use often. A smirk refers to a smile evoking insolence, scorn, or offensive smugness. I don't think that is the image that you are looking for when you use it and when I read it, the flow of the story is interrupted because it just doesn't fit.

I love to read and read all the time. I'm not a good writer and am always impressed when I read what other's have written.

thanks

Oh, this was just wonderful! Really enjoyed. Thank you!

i really enjoyed this fic, i think it's well written and you had all the things i love in it (namely hurt!Tony and Protective!Gibbs ;D ) Also i liked how you brought forth the impact all of this had on McGee and Ziva, because usually people consentrate on Gibbs and Tony, the rest of the team are kinda forgotten, but you bring their feelings in the mix too. I liked the ending and really think you picked a good place to stop, and the fic was indeed satisfying :)

I love you.

You are awesome. I swear though... if Tony doesn't give up his near death experiences soon... geez I'm with McGeek on this one. *Sigh*

Anyway, I love the NCIS family, 'specially Gibbs and DiNozzo father/son. Thanks for writing, you did a FANTASTIC job.

Thanks again.

Thankyou for a great story, i enjoyed reading it very much. Julie xx

Great angst- and whump-story. I love emotional recovery after trauma. But if it fits better for you, it is okay, it was a fairly long story and you have posted quick updates, so it stayed thrilling. It was really well written und I enjoyed to read such an angsty and whumpy story.

i loved this one! great ending.

Great way to end the story. With all the love around them, Tony and Gibbs will no doubt heal. Thanks for another wonderful story.

Oh wow, did not know this last update would be the LAST update on this story! But you're right.. Was a fitting place to end it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and all the good Tony whumping you dished out. It had suspense, cliffhangers, touch of horror-elements and a few twists and surprises here and there (Bomb in the garage is an excellent example of that. Did NOT see that coming!)

I enjoyed how all the characters were somehow part of it and were presented to deal with the after-effects in their own ways.

Won't drag out this review too much, just wanted to say that I am eagerly awaiting your next fic, if one is in the planning that is?

Is it too shameless of me to hope for a Tiva fic in the hoping? Haha, either way, whatever it is, I'm sure it'll be as enjoyable as this if not more. (with your imagination and talent - I wouldn't be surprised! ))

Until next time, take care!

Phew, nobody was hurt! :) That does my heart good, haha.

Awh, I just love me some Ducky!

The Ziva-Tim conversation was really beautiful, and I enjoy the way you write and convey their friendship!

Only one chapter left in my inbox regarding this story's updates over these past few days - off to read it now! :)

Evil cliffhanger - that I utterly adore!

Poor Timmy, this is not something he should have to witness! (

But they can't be dead, right? It's Gibbs - he CAN'T die! Nor will he let Tony either!

The suspense is killing me and I'm jumping right into the next chapter immediately!

Whew, finally got to sit down and start reading through the many updates piling up in my inbox of this story! Last week before summer break sure is hectic!

Anyways, onto the chapter!

Awesomely wow, is the only word to describe it.. Poor Tony sure is suffering under your creative and beautiful writing. But we all love hurt!Tony, don't we? But I do hope he's not too badly hurt..

Off to next chappie!

Awwwwwwww. Great story. Glad to see Tony recovered enough to be back at work and able to torment McGee and Ziva once again.