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Mykklaw 5/21/12 . chapter 5
Is this the end? You should really try writing some notes instead of copying and pasting the disclaimer and feedback message... :/
Mykklaw 5/20/12 . chapter 4
For Diana, you mean Artemis' Roman counterpart. Correct?

And at the end...who is Paris?
Mishelle20 4/30/12 . chapter 5
Great job with this.
anon 2/17/12 . chapter 5
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anon 5/27/11 . chapter 2
Great story, liked your smily!:o)
Catherineza 3/31/11 . chapter 5
awww so sweet and sad that im crying awwww yah hades is awesome poor hera zeus shouldnt cheat tchtchtch
Alright 2/13/11 . chapter 1
First, I have to say the phrase is supposed to be "I'm fed up with it." But despite that (and a few spelling errors), this is a pretty good story. Nicely done.
Lonely Bleeding Liar 1/17/11 . chapter 5
This is really cute but I think Zeus should've suffered more.
InevitableAbyss 7/18/10 . chapter 5
Awwww...good job. I'm really just starting to get in to Greek Mythology, but nevertheless, I enjoyed the story of how Zeus' sleeziness was wrong.
Mystery 7/2/10 . chapter 5
It was a spectacular story!
Hime-samaxGoddess Athena 6/26/10 . chapter 5
artemis not diana you know diana is from the romans and i hate them but no offense K
EMPG22HoPe 6/1/10 . chapter 5
I love it! You have a very nice plot and and very good grammars and spellings. Keep up the good work! This story has been added to my favorites! :]
Smiling Eyes 5/23/10 . chapter 5
Sweet story. Got a li'l tear in my eye
felixlee14 5/23/10 . chapter 5
Nice amusing story:D I like how Hades is playing 'counsellor' to both Zeus and Heraand how Persephone loves Hades so much:D
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