Brilliant and full of meaning, as always, Zae. You know, Tiva always reminds me of trying to force two positive sides of a magnet together...they repel, but only when they are so close together that they might as well join. Repel, attract, repel, attract, and so on, and so forth. Tony and Ziva are two sides of the same coin and in this fic you have made that metaphor almost tangible. This was a pleasure to read.

poetic.

Oh, I just love the way you look at these characters. So amamzing.

I loved it... Pure excellence.

very well written. a little but too much metaphor for me, considering school os pretty much over, but still, nice job.

Only you can use astronomy and geology as a metaphor for T/Z and have it make sense, as well as, sound poetic. Amazing.

I particularly like the planets section. It was so apt a description of the last five years. It also gave my fading hope a boost that they may still tilt off their axis just enough for patterns to change. Thank you.

Feel like I had a lesson in astrophysics and geology and I loved it!

Good comparisons.

Good piece!