It's hard to find good SasoDei, so I'm glad I decided to check this one out. I love how perfectly you captured an artist's feelings and how you showed their different art styles and views when it came to mixing colors. You really captured their personalities well in this and made their relationship work. Being in an unofficial, unspoken relationship works for this pairing. I would have loved to see this as a multi-chapter story to see the entire thing flesh out, but it stands fine on its own, too. Great work! :D

OH JOY I enjoyed this quite a lot. Thank you 3

I really liked this. It's wonderful.

"In a fit of frustration one evening when Deidara just would not shut the fuck up about his stuffed animals and how he'd bought an otter that day and it was awesome, Sasori had kissed him into silence."

LOVE LOVE LOVE that line; I reread it and grinned stupidly each time. This was so cute and lovely; I loved it. :)

Epic! Everything you write is just awesomeness it itself, SERIOUSLY!

ok then

Beautiful! You've captured an artist's mood perfectly, that I can say, being an artist myself. This story was different from the others of yours, It didn't have a chronologic course of events. It makes the story a bit confusing, but that matched the spirit of this one, so in general, I realy like it. Thank you.

very cute :_

Okay that was really cute. And it made me smile. This pairing definitely needs more love.

Haven't read a good SasoDei in quite a while, so this held double the enjoyment! Your characterization, plot, and writing style continue to be fabulous.

Three favorite lines:

'That wasn't the colour of a sunset, because it had many colours that changed and morphed and made his life so much harder.'

'Being an artist himself, Sasori should have realised all artists were completely insane. However he hadn't bargained on meeting insanity himself in the form of Deidara.' Ha! Just remember, Sasori-you asked for it!

'In a fit of frustration one evening when Deidara just would not shut the fuck up about his stuffed animals and how he'd bought an otter that day and it was awesome, Sasori had kissed him into silence.' OMR...I laughed so stinking hard. xD

I had a lot of fun reading this. Great work!

This was quite a beautifully written story, it's hard to believe that you recieved only one review for ti

Thank you. Thank you so so much. If I could be any story in the world it would be this one. Everything about this just feels so me. The sunsets, the city, the spending money I don't have on art supplies. And the otter. Can't forget the otter!

I love it to pieces

thank you