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Kyna'vyra
2008-04-20
ch 23,
abuseAmazing! This was a terrific story! I've never read anything like it and I wish there was more.
onaleia
2008-04-17
ch 23, anon.
abuseTightly woven, original, very well done.
ThePhantomFly
2008-04-11
ch 23,
abuseDUN DUN DUN.
One of the more obscure and confusing fics I've read, but wonderful nonetheless.
Well done.
Warrior Priestess
2008-02-20
ch 23,
abuseCool. Dancing. Nice.
mountainelements
2008-02-03
ch 23,
abuseThis is a very original story. :) I'm not sure I understood all of what happened, but it's still very good.
piwqefjk
2007-10-31
ch 23,
abuseThis is a brilliant story - it's a fascinating concept, and I love the way you put it all together xD
anon
2007-10-13
ch 23, anon.
abuseI enjoyed this story very much; I am very impressed at how you made all the different parts of the school work together. Thank you.
Jemma Blackwell
2007-09-06
ch 23,
abuseTotally awesome story! I loved the rituals. The situations were harrowing enough for anyone who likes a good scare, and the interactions between the characters were heart-rendering enough too. It was just fascinating!
too-much-inspiration
2007-09-02
ch 23,
abuseInteresting way to end it all, but a good way at that. It was rather confusing at the beginning and I never did figure out exactly when this took place, but it was interesting none the less. Thank you for writing this and good job at making it interesting!
Michelle
2007-07-10
ch 23, anon.
abuseThis story was amazing! A very unique idea that enjoyed quite a bit!
Kristyn
2007-07-02
ch 23, anon.
abuseWhen I first read Balance, it was only up to chapter 21. Returning four years later, it made me very happy to find you had written the conclusion. :) I think you did a wonderful job with this story; the way you had characters overcome rivalries to work together was actually quite moving-- and rather poignant what with the way the books are going. This work and Ozma's Squib series both have that element to them, a human way of treating the characters, that I really like. I enjoyed Balance a lot, and thank you for writing it!
SurgicalSteel
2007-03-09
ch 23,
abuseI really enjoyed this - obviously AU at this point, but I'd still sort of like to think that Draco and Snape *might* be redeemable, and they were certainly sympathetic here. Nice interweaving of elements from a number of wonderful tales!
thekams
2007-03-07
ch 23, anon.
abuseWow.

That's all I really have to say, because this fic is amazing. It's so original, and beautiful. But...the sun is rising on the wrong side?? What happened to Hogwarts and the world outside? I really hope that the commencement at the end of the chapter means that we're going to see a sequel, because I really want to see what everything is like outside, now, and if everyone still alive who showed up at Hogwarts during this will know.

So yes, wow. I loved it =)
aradonai
2007-02-27
ch 23,
abuseThis story was brilliantly written! The action was nicely pieced together and I was so nervous for the characters during their ordeals. It was so well written that I felt like I was in the story, experiencing each part as it was written and worrying over what would happen and who would appear next. Congrats on an awesome story!

~aradonai
LandUnderWave
2007-02-21
ch 23,
abuse*laughs* I loved how everyone, from everywhen, came to help when they were needed. And I do believe this story, along with my latest violin practice, has given me several plot bunnies I need to work with immediantly. Thanks!

Lilz
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