 Magus-15IchiGo 5/12/12 . chapter 12All chapter‘s good. (I read all of them in 3 day [not in a row though].) I love all the one shot. The theme was so different from any Gundam SEED fic that I see so far. It‘s so awesome. So unique. So sweet. So funny. So deep. And so-so.
I really fallin in love with the idea you got in your mind. Could you make another chapter when you got time and have some idea about this?
Oh, and Chibi so cute. XD
I love Arkangel and Kusanagi too. Kusanagi was cool! xD
Uh ... but I‘m curious with the other child... (Kira and Lacus child... xo) Are they have a sweet time with the war ship like what Chibi have with Kusanagi? |
 Mathiasosx 5/12/11 . chapter 12Wow it's been a while I'm guilty of the same offense though. You're still keeping them at the same high standard as always. Just so you know Chapter 8 of Defender is at the beta Reader right now and chapter 9 will see the introduction of your Archangel to my story.
Keep it up :D |
 Mathiasosx 12/21/10 . chapter 11You really do fluffy pieces really well. I'd been looking forward to this and I can say I was not disappointed. Well done as usual keep it coming. |
 Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 12/20/10 . chapter 11Gosh, I can't believe how much I missed this fic! So welcome back I guess! :D
Chibi is so cute, and it's good to see a bit of Kusanagi this chapter!
I can't wait for the next theme. Keep writing! |
 Mathiasosx 9/8/10 . chapter 10Not laugh out loud but enough to make you smile or chuckle a little. Another well done piece. Up to your usual standard. I look forward to the next one. Keep writing. |
 Winds of Change 9/8/10 . chapter 10 Sorry for the delay in reviewing. I've been very busy in my day job.
So in return, I get to review both Chapters 9 and 10.
Chapter 9: It's nice to see Dominion's side of the story for once. I mean, like Natarle, she's still naive to the real face of the Earth Alliance.
Her fate was already sealed barely before it had even started because she is pretty much a newcomer to the business of war.
Chapter 10: I can feel for both Kira and Athrun since I myself had kept some naughty pictures myself but in a diskette rather than a CD or a flash drive.
I was nineteen and foolish back then but it did give me a few perks.
I like the joke though since it can be considered as Archie's and Minerva's payback for both Lacus and Cagalli (if and when the young women would figure out the contents of the "private" files."
Keep goin' at it. |
 ShyRose 8/5/10 . chapter 9 Nice. I really like the idea of the ships being able to interact with everyone. Did you get the idea from ASTRAY. Gotta love those side stories (stargazer was a bit too sad for me) though they are hard to find. Well I look forward to your updates. |
 Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 8/5/10 . chapter 9Oh my word, that was so beautifully angsty. I could cry, I really am close to. I felt Archangel's pain, you write that brilliantly... |
 Ex-Overlord Azer Khushrenada 7/13/10 . chapter 8Aw... I hope you create Archangel x Minerva since these two were perfect if they become couple...
well, sadly you can't write Yuri... Well, can't blame you anyway!
So, I give you challange to write a Yuri about Archangel and Minerva! Care to accept a poor Yuri Lover Chalenge? |
 Mathiasosx 7/11/10 . chapter 8Damn I really am a sap I enjoyed that far too much. Much better I don't think I need to say much more other than keep writing. |
 Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 7/11/10 . chapter 8Oh...
Well, that complicates things...a lot.
I like that Meyrin came in, it seems very appropriate! I hope Minerva finds another ship, 'cause although I like Minerva, I prefer the idea of Kusanagi and Archangel being together, for some reason... |
 Mathiasosx 7/5/10 . chapter 7To be honest not your best still good just not your best. I'm not sure what's wrong it just doesn't feel quite right. Perhaps you were ting to hard?. I'm thankful for the continuation though. Just remember Inspiration can't be defined or controlled. It just happens. Don't force it out let it flow.
Keep writing. |
 Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 7/5/10 . chapter 7As awesome as ever, and although this was quite a sad topic, you pulled it off well. It seems that ships are just as emotional as humans, and you do a good job of making them actual characters. I'm practically in tears; your writing makes it very real to me. |
 Meyrin-x-ZAFTgirl 7/1/10 . chapter 6I'm sure Athrun, Kira and Shinn weren't allowed to forget the incident anytime soon! Hilarious. Keep updating! |
 USAKO 6/28/10 . chapter 6 Hahahah! What is Archangel thinking? (: Though I can understand her curiosity...
"It's a love..affection-like thing," Kira hastily added, "Nothing important." - LOL. Nice one, Kira
"It's a process of sorts. Err, a thing that when two humans like each other, a very enjoyable process..." - HAHAHA Enjoyable process indeed!
"It's part of our daily life, I think," Kira added, face turning brighter red than his best friend, "Ouch!" - LOL. DAILY?
"It's frequent enough for Athrun!" Kira hissed back, "He got 5 children, for goodness sake! You would think he do that once every week!" - HAHAHAHA OMG Come to think of it! FIVE
USELESS? AHAHAH XD
"Well, your highness, they said it was a daily thing. Well, at least for your majesty," he bowed a little, the last part referring to Athrun. - HAHAHAHA Poor Athrun! Daily! OMG XDD
Love how Murrue ended with that muse. XD
Write on! This one's really interesting :333
Usako |