This is a really cool story. I liked how you wrote their realationship in this. It seemed in character and not over the top. In the last chapter I was saying to myself, "Whatever you do, don't start crying." lol I didn't, but still it was pretty emotional for me.

I loved reading this, too good, I loved the happy ending.

Whilst reading this last chapter, I was repeatedly thinking to my self 'Dont cry Rochelle, whatever you do whilst reading this just . .' when all of a sudden, '1000 years' by Cristinna Perri starts playing on my iPod (iPod attacks with depressting yet extemly fitting song), yeah, I started tearing up about that time -.- (IT WAS SUPER-EFFECTIVE!)

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY (even if i did find it at 3am, even though I had a 8am in the morning ")

Nice to see a happy ending for once, I have read to meny thief/citronshipping fics that are just plain deppressing :(

That was so adorable! Love the idea. Thanks for sharing!

juste means just in french, justifié means justified

Aww I enjoyed so much reading your story! I was lucky I found it just now ad could read it all at onece, had to stop today to go to work and even tough I knew what was going to happend right after (in the canon related chapters) I still felt tense the whole day because of what was happening in the fic...

And about that thing you wrote that Mahes vision was becoming truth well it was comprensible to me.

I enjoyed reading this story all the way through. I, throughout this entire fanfic, was never left disappointed. Congratulations, mate, for finishing it. I myself am a writer, but I have a bad tenacity to leave them incomplete. Again, fantastic work. I hope you continue to create awesome work that you will enjoy writing, as much as I do reading them. :D

That was the best ending. Ever. No contest.

This story is apsolutely amazing! It has everything, words cannot describe how much I love this! Thank you for writing this amazing piece of literature, don't stop. :)

Oh my - I can't - I don't even - gahhhhh! If I was the type to cry at stories, I'm sure this one would've had my bawling. Never actually shed a tear at something fictional, mind you, but my eyes felt... like maybe they WANTED to be while I read this. Especially the end. I'm not one to enjoy mature fics, but this fanfiction is actually probably one of my all-time favorites now. I mean... seriously, words cannot even express.

This was an amazing masterpiece of a fanfiction, and I cannot express ENOUGH how in love with it I am, especially the ending. Beautiful. Enough said.

This was absolutely brilliant. I like the switching positions you did with the characters because, though I still prefer Marik as the bottom, I do believe that this is a very versatile pairing. I adore thiefshipping and citronshipping; unfortunately there is a lack of good (and long) fics for the latter.

You tied everything from the past and present together perfectly and the way you plotted out the relationship between Bakura and Ryou was superb. I can actually picture his thoughts and opinions as canon.

You are amazing and now I have to go search through the rest of your fics. Great job and keep up the good work!

This story is simply amazing, and its really drawn me into it to think of what happened in between the moments shown on the series. You are an incredible writer, Chaos, you really dipped this story into the actual story and made it believable to have happened.

This is probably my favourite story yet.

Also I was inspired to make a video based off of it, I hope its ok. xD

Link - watch?v_ncliQ8pTKk&

such a good story. im glad i read it, even if it felt like a sappy love story at parts

Why oh why haven't I read this sooner? I absolutely loved it! I couldn't stop reading, even when I knew I should go to sleep...but this was just too good to 'put down', as they say.

Thiefshipping is one of the few Yuugiou shippings that make sense to me, and this wonderful fic did nothing but strengthen my opinion on the matter. It fitted in with the canon so well, that Thiefshipping just HAS to be canon as well! No other explanation really.

And the ending was fantastic! That last line, I should've seen it coming but didn't, and it was a wonderful sweet surprise!

Definitely Favorited! Thanks for this more than very enjoyable read!

I started reading this a while back but had to stop before the last chapter because I hadnt finished watching the ceremonial duel yet and didn't want it to be spoiled. I just watched the last episode of Yu-Gi-Oh like 10 minutes ago. The first thing I did afterwards was pull out my iPod and finally finish this story!

It was so sweet and cute and adorable and sad and all around wonderful! I love your style. I really like how you kept bringing back Marik's line. It's deep.