|Reviews for One Step Ahead|
| Onyx Moonbeam 9/13/10 . chapter 1
"Dude, always with the scissors." I love how predictable Dean is, and how Sam's just as wonderfully predictable. Completely there to make sure that Dean's okay, knowing somehow that he isn't feeling great.
Also, this lets me picture Sam in a pool hall, and that's a good picture!
| Liafrombrazil 6/17/10 . chapter 1
Have I reviewed this one? I don't think so. Sorry for being late, again.
Do you know what this drabble looks like? A piece of concrete poetry. It's inverted triangle-shaped, like the roles are inverted, Dean at the library and Sam getting the money. Also, Dean "pouts (loved it) a little" while Sam takes care of things.
I love "Dean standing agape", just he shouldn't be surprised by now. Love all the words. Also? This' perfect wherever you look at. Thanks.
| The Phantom Dragon 6/3/10 . chapter 1
no dean i don't believe it
u lost AGAIN(said in rather unsympathetic tones)
| deangirl1 5/26/10 . chapter 1
AW! This was great... It still seems wrong for Sam to be doing the hustling... ;-)
| CatBeist 5/26/10 . chapter 1
| MeAzrael 5/26/10 . chapter 1
**Giggling ** Yeah, good old fate - so nice to see things reversed for once, and how bitter to lose another game of rock-paper-scissors :-) Would've loved to see Sam juggle with the billiard cue in front of some badass guys... and it's awesome how he comes to rescue Dean ;-)
| Mad Server 5/25/10 . chapter 1
Yes. Yes please. This.
| Orange Autumn 5/25/10 . chapter 1
Cute! Poor Dean, always so bad at RockPaperScissors. :D Good drabble.
| PADavis 5/25/10 . chapter 1
Bizarre twist of fate - that was wonderful. And a sore stomach. Beautifully done.
| deanandhisimpala 5/24/10 . chapter 1
Oh dear, I think I love this! It made me laugh AND go "awwww..." so it's perfect! The second line in the story made me laugh so much, I can't even tell you. The "blasted game of rock-paper-scissors" had me chuckling, and then Sam 'prancing' out the door - well that word is just hilarious, and I can so picture just how Sam would look doing it. And then the hand settling on his neck, and the "I know. Let's go home". Awww. I love how you can go from hilarious to sentimental in like... one line? Awesomely done. :D
| Edina Clouds 5/24/10 . chapter 1
"dusty old tomes" - very nice Enkidu
| Katydid43 5/24/10 . chapter 1
I absolutely love the fact that Sam always wins when they play rock, paper, scissors! I can't imagine that Dean hasn't picked up on that fact. It really makes you wonder why he does it... Excellently done! :-)
| DeansBabyBird 5/24/10 . chapter 1
Oh and Sam has such big 'ole hands! Yumm!
| nwspaprtaxis 5/24/10 . chapter 1
Awww! Thanks so much for such an awesome Birthday Fic! *tacklesmishes*
ROFL! I ADORE THE FLIP! LOVE IT! It totally jerks you, and makes you think, but it totally totally works! I love Dean being the one to be stuck in the library doing research while Sam's the one hustling pool (the fact that Sam's hustling pool is actually funnier...). And it works with the rock-papers-scissors... Oh, Dean... I can just picture the petulant pout when Dean realizes he lost and Sam's crazy grin. And Sam PRANCING is awesomesauce. Prancing. Just picturing it is making me giggle uncontrollably.
And love the texts between them... and Sam coming back to the library to get Dean out of there. Love Dean just leaning forward to rest his head on the uneven table (an uneven table! GAH! *fails* *falls* LOVE THAT THIS LIBRARY HAS INSUFFICIENT FUNDS LIKE MINE!)... and massaging his stomach. Massaging his stomach... *cuddles image* But Sam's majorly sweet... love Sam's "I know. Let's go home" to Dean's quiet "Don't feel great." Kind of sad they refer to seedy motel rooms as "home"
*tacklesmishes you for this*
And, yes there was so totally a librarian watching Dean surreptitiously to make sure he doesn't faceplant but doesn't make her move because he's a stranger and she isn't sure how he'd take her concern... and totally points Sam his way when Sam asks... *grins*
| Indigo2831 5/23/10 . chapter 1
And a giant hand at that!
Aww, poor Deano! I hope he feels better. Great job!