EXTRAORDINARY,THIS CHAPTER MADE ME TEAR-UP A BIT BECAUSE IT'S SO SWEET AND TOUCHING!

How sad!

The story was really cute and touching!

It seems like your stories can always add more depth to characters, yet still stick to the canon. I liked this quite a lot, since it showed deeper sides of Scar and Zira (my favorite characters) without sticking just to the all evil, all the time thing. I doubt you would ever read this review, but I just had to say this.

Wow, this was brilliant. :-)

I really love tha backstory you gave Zira, such a well-thought-out piece! I think I will peruse some of your other fics, I bet they're just as good as this one!

Gotta say it again, AWESOME!

Aneis

I am AMAIZED! This fills the story in perfectly! I abselutly ADORE it.

I know its been a while since you finished this but I had to read it and I was amazed at how wonderful this story was. I liked your idea of how Zira came to the pride and how Vitani and Kovu were not Scar's children. Any way great story. I hope you have more stories soon so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :)

That was so good! i really liked how you made zira say doom. doom is such a scary anyway, i really really enjoyed this story and i hope you can make some more really good stories. thanks for being a good writer! bye!

good chapter! so much feelings! good job

this is so good! i really really like this!

funny authors note at the end! i don't think scar would actually be sorry for killing simba and mufasa. well i guess you are making this different by making the bad guys nice, but anyway, i really like how at first everyone thinks that kovu and vitani are scar's kids and then now suddenly they aren't. so cool.

this is really good! in lioning 2 thay made zira seem all bad. you make her nice (sometimes) i really like your discriptions! i really really like this!

i really like zira explaination of her story. it fits in very well with your story. i'm gonna read chapter 3 now. chapter 8 to my story is comeing soon

this story sounds really really good! i don't especially like zira or scar, but this sounds like it is going to be a great story. and it's even finished too. yay. hey do me a favor and read my story! it'll make me happy!

I'm really enjoyin readin these!