 Nielae 2009-02-06 . chapter 1It seems like your stories can always add more depth to characters, yet still stick to the canon. I liked this quite a lot, since it showed deeper sides of Scar and Zira (my favorite characters) without sticking just to the all evil, all the time thing. I doubt you would ever read this review, but I just had to say this. |
 bdlywrttn 2007-11-14 . chapter 7Wow, this was brilliant. :-)
I really love tha backstory you gave Zira, such a well-thought-out piece! I think I will peruse some of your other fics, I bet they're just as good as this one! |
 SenniClaws 2006-06-26 . chapter 1Gotta say it again, AWESOME!
Aneis |
 SenniClaws 2006-05-28 . chapter 7I am AMAIZED! This fills the story in perfectly! I abselutly ADORE it. |
 Narfy 2005-01-30 . chapter 7I know its been a while since you finished this but I had to read it and I was amazed at how wonderful this story was. I liked your idea of how Zira came to the pride and how Vitani and Kovu were not Scar's children. Any way great story. I hope you have more stories soon so keep up the good work and have fun writing. :) |
 Kiara32 2004-10-01 . chapter 7That was so good! i really liked how you made zira say doom. doom is such a scary word.well anyway, i really really enjoyed this story and i hope you can make some more really good stories. thanks for being a good writer! bye! |
 Kiara32 2004-10-01 . chapter 6good chapter! so much feelings! good job |
 Kiara32 2004-09-30 . chapter 5this is so good! i really really like this!! |
 Kiara32 2004-09-30 . chapter 4funny authors note at the end! i don't think scar would actually be sorry for killing simba and mufasa. well i guess you are making this different by making the bad guys nice, but anyway, i really like how at first everyone thinks that kovu and vitani are scar's kids and then now suddenly they aren't. so cool. |
 Kiara32 2004-09-30 . chapter 3this is really good! in lioning 2 thay made zira seem all bad. you make her nice (sometimes) i really like your discriptions! i really really like this!! |
 Kiara32 2004-09-30 . chapter 2i really like zira explaination of her story. it fits in very well with your story. i'm gonna read chapter 3 now. chapter 8 to my story is comeing soon |
 Kiara32 2004-09-27 . chapter 1this story sounds really really good! i don't especially like zira or scar, but this sounds like it is going to be a great story. and it's even finished too. yay. hey do me a favor and read my story! it'll make me happy! |
 lexi 2004-03-24 . chapter 2 I'm really enjoyin readin these! |
 lexi 2004-03-24 . chapter 1 Bada pa, pa, pa! I'm lovin it! lol. That is a great story. Follows everything in the first Lion King as well as the 2nd one! |
 The Dishwasher 2004-03-24 . chapter 7Oh, this was an incredibly good insight into Zira's and Scar's lives at Pride Rock, and almost made me sorry for Scar. (almost!) I only wish you wrote more on Simba's and Sarabi's reunion, because you write TLK so well! |