Haunting, but so eloquently written.

What a sad and tragic story. :( But, I love stories that explore a scene from another point of view. Thanks for introducing me to a new story as well. I will be sure to check out Green Amber's story (if I can find it).

Oh my god

This is very well written and a really clever concept. Just brilliant work :)

Amazing writing, very deep and well executed, you could feel the anguish among the xmen, very few drama stories can be written like this with such feelings without being ridiculous, congratulations on achieving this!

So I actually read her piece. It freaked me and made me cry and hate it and want to tear something out, and then I go ahead and read this just 'cause YOU wrote it and I get all the same sensations all over again. I just can't take all this death and mayhem to my poor southerners. I love them. I don't want them dead. :sighs: :groans: Gotta find something nice and sweet to write.

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Right.

you know, i was already an emotional wreck after watching the LOST finale last night... and now i begin my day with the utter joy and excitement of seeing your author alerts in my inbox, which quickly transitions into the tragedy of this lovey piece of work? i mean, it was beautiful, of course... but i just don't know how much of this emotional rollercoaster i can take, lol. well, let's head off to 'i get by' and see if that cheers me up a bit. ;)

Beautiful.

Oh My God. I hadn't read Green Ambers Highwayman until just before reading yours. The way you picked up off the end of hers is perfect and almost as if written by the same person. You moved me to tears it was that realistic. Just thought you should know how good that was

Ivy-Marie (,)