  tHEeLF1 3/20/02 . chapter 2 great story, keep up the good work |
| tHEeLF1 3/20/02 . chapter 2 great story, keep up the good work |
| Boilersbarnone 2/14/02 . chapter 1 It was okay... doesn't have the Aliens feel to it. |
 Cyber-Undead 2/14/02 . chapter 1hmM, a very promising start. Lot of details too, lets see what will follow... keep postin'em!... |
| Daniel 2/13/02 . chapter 1 pleeeeeease! finnish soon |
| Stuzack2 2/13/02 . chapter 1 oooooooooooooh, very nice piece. (looks kind of familiar(ish)) but other than that, you got the descriptions just right. oh, and please write more this is good stuff. |
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