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| Aristhea 2002-08-10 ch 1,  | abuseVery good and it's great that you kept to the sonnet structure! That must have been quite difficult! *loves Snape and hopes many of his mysteries will soon be reavealed in future books* |
| CartoonJessie 2002-04-16 ch 1, | abuseWow. This sonnet is REALLY beautifull. Snape is my favourite HP character (ofcourse because of Alan Rickman!) (Thanks by the way for reviewing my Metatron-fanfic) But this sonnet is sooo nice. I love sonnets, but when I thought of Severus while reading it, I loved this one even more. He really has to go on living in one of the next HP books! He makes me sad sometimes... I loved the dance-metaphore for life. Nicely found! Greets Jessie |
| Alysun 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHey, nice stuff! lol |
| Adastra 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed that |
| ThreeOranges 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! Heartfelt and beautiful. |
| aya 2002-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abusecall me when you get over your little crush on snape, and i'll see about helping you write a *real* fic, okay? is that okay with you? |
| Claudia3 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseOh that's beautiful! I love dancing myself and you've captured the spirit of it very nicely ... and the link to Severus is just *right*. Thanks for sharing. |
| Coesius 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abusei have read several attempts at poetry about Severus, most ended up sounding unnatural and showy without feeling. But your sonnet was truly beautiful. I could 'feel' each line. There were no showy words only added to impress or a forced rhyme; the rhyme seemed very natural. I loved it... love, coesius |
| isabelle tiger 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abusethat was beautiful, but what was the motivation for the sonnet? |
| K.E. Enos 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely. i love poety, and this is fantastic! |
| Xenia 2002-02-12 ch 1, | abuseNow i have to read your fanfiction to see what this is all about. It's funny how we all see severus as having been emotionally wounded. |