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lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 15
Glad that Taylor did something good /for a change/ and give it back to Hannah. But Hannah could be right, maybe there is nepotism here? Can you be objective theacher when your daughter is concerned? hm hm

And not getting into fight, that's bullshit! You should defend yourself when being atacked!

In total, great funny story, like the others!

tnx irishdip!
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 14
Poor Taylor! Gibbs is fanatic...
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 12
No, Taylor, this is suicide! You should run away after this! Hope that Gibbs will count to 1000 before reacting...Patricia too...
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 8
Great attitude, Taylor! lol

I'm stubborn too, but even i would crack under pressure of evidence!
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 7
Oh that Gibbs is pain in the ass, Taylor can't get away with something not even once!
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 6
Taylor, brilliant plan! Abby, tattoo? Great idea!

:-D
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 5
Paricia should have known better. Opportuniti makes a criminal...

:-)
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 4
Yeah, Taylor,great system! Your grades, your bussines. And you're NOT SHORT!

:-D
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 2
sweet chapter. Patricia and Taylor, mum and daughter. very nice
lucky8888 11/7/10 . chapter 1
aah boredom again. Gibbs, you jerk! Find a hobby or sport for your brat. Or at least order to write lines like this: I am not gonna smoke again, drink alcohol, sneak out etc. 1000 times or more. That should keep her busy...

:-)
Ashleyder1 8/24/10 . chapter 15
Wow this was a really great story! One of my favorites in this series. I feel that I can tell you now that I really wasn't sure about Patricia, especially when it started looking like marriage was in the works. I couldn't have been more wrong! You did an incredible job with this thread! I really like Patricia and the way you've integrated her into the family. Loved that wooden spoon theme, too! Truly excellent job - very impressive!
Ashleyder1 8/24/10 . chapter 3
She cut it up! Loved that! Really loved her deal with Patricia too and how that played out!
Ashleyder1 8/24/10 . chapter 1
Still catching up on my reading...it's been taking me awhile...

Anyways, this was a fantastic start! Really good writing in this chapter and I love the way you've portrayed Patricia.
Nevereel 6/25/10 . chapter 15
Wow, Taylor doing the right thing was refreshing, but I'm sure she won't be able to keep it up forever. Great ending!
gibbsgirlie08 6/25/10 . chapter 15
Oh so much frun to read, proud of taylor. Great job keep it up!
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