I hope that you continue with this like oh, having Buffy send the poem to Angel or something like that and his reaction to it.

*tissue warning* short poemfic, Buffy misses

Angel...how about "My Hungry Soul" Or "Open Kept"

for the title?

how about "Love's Poetry" ?

i liked it, it was sweet

Hmm...the formatting was kinda bad, but an overall good story. But...the characters seemed a little more childish then they should be. Maybe you should read over it and improve/elaborate a little more on it.

I fixed it so it should be readable now.

I loved how you put the poem stanzas in the story...it made it more emotional :)

a good title would be "LONGING"

Great story. Anybody else feel like crying? I've got extra tissues. Suggested title:"Whom my soul did love" or "How do I love thee?"