 Pirate-on-Fleet-Street 2/7/11 . chapter 5I apologize for taking so long to come back to this.
This is wonderful! One can almost taste Damon's struggle to keep his hands off and refrain from saying something un-Stefan-like.
I'm excited to see what comes next, and how long this body switch will last.
PoFS |
 my 2 guys 10/24/10 . chapter 9that was both that best i had ever read keep it up |
 Perfect Pirate Captain 9/26/10 . chapter 9Nice story, great job! |
 starshine 8/27/10 . chapter 9Wonderful fic! I specially enjoyed Stefan's attempt at impersonating Damon with Alaric. And of course the sweet Delena! Thank you. |
 Amanda 8/25/10 . chapter 9 Nooo, you can't end it like that :O That was just like I really mean cliffhanger! |
 Doodle87 8/20/10 . chapter 9awesome story. It was very interesting. |
 tast3the3RAiiNBOW 8/19/10 . chapter 9Even though I liked the ending, why must you end it with a question? That's just mean. |
 XxxmusicluverxxX 8/18/10 . chapter 9Amazing Story :)
I really enjoyed reading this fanfic! |
 JustCallMeDaisy 8/16/10 . chapter 8I can't wait to read more :) |
 Pirate-on-Fleet-Street 6/29/10 . chapter 4Ah, finally we arrive at the body switch.
I'm surprised he didn't just blame the situation on his drinking so much. It was kind of odd that he would jump immediately to the conclusion that Bonnie did it. What a wierd situation that would be! Waking up and you're not even yourself!
There were quite a number of typos in this chapter that could easily be cleaned up. I like the story and the way you write, but errors can be a little bit distracting. Other than that, nice work :)
Fleet |
 lynsay 6/25/10 . chapter 8This is good and I hate that Katherine... |
 bluestriker666 6/25/10 . chapter 8keep it up |
 Kara.R.K 6/25/10 . chapter 8i really like this chapter, the whole convo between Jeremy and Elena was really nice. I like that Elena notices the difference in jeremy and how Jeremy realised just what Elena's been going through trying to be strong and stuff... can't wait for the next chapter, i wonder if bonnie will be able to fix it... :) |
 OCnative 6/25/10 . chapter 8"Again the offer to shoot him is still on the table."
OHGOSHLMAO, that line had me rolling. I don't know why. Maybe it's because I could totally see him saying that.
Awesome chapter - can't wait for the next! |
 SimplyGarnet 6/23/10 . chapter 7I'm loving this... really nice work! |