just lovely! You're such a good writer!

Irial is temptation.

Ooo, I thought this was simply fantastic.

I love your use of description, and the language is, quite frankly, fabulous.

And yes, I did enjoy reading this as much as you enjoyed writing it..I think.

Cheers! :)

Aaw... that's sweet.

Too bad its likely that he'll get bored with her and dump her. Or she'll wear apart and die. Just saying.

I really liked it :)

That was awesome

loved it

write another :D