one question: WHEN DID THEY HAVE THE SEX? There was no such alluding that they'd ever touched each other in such a way! So confuzzled…!

please explain what i missed. 00

Heh funny how they haven't even kissed on the lips yet they're expecting a kid already lol x looks like they do a heck lot behind doors meh ;)

Your story is very good, well written, and original! :D Very detailed too. I suppose the only thing I thought odd was... a baby? O.o I mean, the readers didn't even see Aurelia and Fai share a real kiss on the lips, so now I'm thinking, where in the world and WHEN did they... conceive a child? O.o

Awww!

Fai and Aurelia is such a cute married couple!

I can't help but grin through the whole story!

And it hurts my face so much! 'D

I loved this story. It is one of the stories that made me want more almost constantly. Are you sure you can't use magic like Aurelia? I'm joking, but I thought it was beautiful. This last chapter was my most favorite by far. It is because of Yuko's price for Fai and Aurelia. Presence, one word that meant so much. I loved this chapter. Do another Tsubasa story, please. I loveed the chapter and I could not have done a bettr job myself. Bravo, bravo! Many thanks for a beautiful and heart touching story. :)

yay a finished story! I hate it when stories aren't finished!

Hi! I've come out from under my rock! The closer the end of the school year gets, the more hectic work gets lol. Anywho, The title of your chapter made me laugh. I love Kurgy. I'm really excited to see how this wraps up! :)

Wow. I really love this story. It is planned out amazingly. evrything is perfect. I can't help but squeal everytime there is an update or a cute fluffy part with Fai. I just get so giddy and I love it. aesome job so far, just keep it up :D

Ahhh! It's almost over! I loved the baby's names, especially Tristan. :) Good job! Ah! Cliff hanger! Will they or won't they stay? Can't wait to read the rest!

8D

8D

8D

! :'D This story has been a blast. It's sad to see that it's already at its end, but I guess that's just how it is! ;; I'm glad I found this story when I did!

Yay the babies are here :D awesome chapter! Keep up with the fantastic writing! Can't wait to see how they gix the world and help the dragons! :)

great story :D keep writing!

YAY! I'm home visiting family, so I haven't been on much and what a nice surprise! :) I read Nevvy's review and I'm agree. Maybe it would be good to start a second story, but I don't mind either way. Any who, great job! Definitely got a Lord of the Rings feeling. :)

you... you LIVE! ... ... WOOHOO!

YESSSSHHHH, what a great chappie, although it totally makes me want more. I love the setting, reminds me a bit of LOTR, which is always a plus in my book. Your writing has improved, and it really hooked me in. I loved how Aurelia put herself in front of Fai when Cadman and the guards came- it was like "PREGNANT LADY DON'T ATTACK!" lol. How many months is she nowadays? My mind automatically goes to 9mos, so Aurelia is meandering about with this huge belly but it amuses me :)

A suggestion if I may, it might be helpful to end this fic and start this chapter as a sequel. Since the writing has changed (more mature I'd say), and you were having a bit of trouble at the 30 chapter mark, maybe seeing a fic with few chapters will inspire you to write more. Either way, I'm still with ya, and look forward to your updates whenever you can :)

O.O poor dragon! Someone help the poor creachers! Anyways awesome chapter and yay an update! :D keep up with the amazingly epic writing! Can't wait for the next one! :3