| Reviews for Last Breath |
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theHuntgoeson 8/20/10 . chapter 1Gosh, that was wicked of you. You warned us of a character death, and made us all think that it was Alex - and then she comes back and shoots Keats dead! The subsequent Gene/Alex banter is lovely, and I do like "Keats was getting in the way, so Gene kicked him over by Shaz' desk a little more." He was always in the way! |
Jazzola 7/3/10 . chapter 1Aww... love the end bit! Awesomeness :) Jazzola :) |
Account is now closed 6/1/10 . chapter 1You've got an excellent piece of writing here which I fully enjoyed reading! I love how descriptive you were whilst describing the intimate moments between Alex and Gene. I'm glad Alex's back! |
Gem6 5/26/10 . chapter 1Awww! That's lovely! Gem x |
Novindalf 5/25/10 . chapter 1Absolutely love it! D |
icingsugar 5/25/10 . chapter 1This was wonderful! I especially love the line: "I hate you Bols. Really do. You're going to Fenchurch West, had enough of you." It sounds like something gene would definitely say :) Right...this ones going to my favorites :) |