 Juu 1/30/12 . chapter 5 I love the pairing, but this wasn't very good.
Why would Logan do that?
Also, the professor would kick him out.
And you really leave the story like this? Without telling what happened with Logan and the others?
And if Pietro loves Evan, why would he go out with Kitty?
Also, them getting together in the last chapter was weird. You went from "Does he hate me" to "I love you" in like 5 seconds.
There are just waaaay too many holes in that story. |
 The Chaotic Ones 10/27/03 . chapter 5Aw... there realy should be another chapter with them happy together, instead of being all sappy |
 DemonRogue 10/26/03 . chapter 5i loved it but you should go and tell what happens and stuff , but thats just my stupid opinion |
 SelenaFrost 10/7/03 . chapter 5well... it was cute but I think it could of been a whole lot better, it could of been longer and you didn't let us know what happened with the whole Logan nearly killing Pietro issue |
 Storm-Pietro 10/3/03 . chapter 5super sweet |
 Dark-English-Rose 6/28/03 . chapter 5One word: Aw |
 maliks-dragon 6/9/03 . chapter 5Aw! How sweet! 10 out of 10 in my book! |
 VoltageRat 10/19/02 . chapter 5 That was awesome! Sequel, please? :) |
 jenna 4/8/02 . chapter 5 awwww. that is sooo cute. hurry and get another chapter out soon. do i can read it. please. |
 GoChi Studios 3/25/02 . chapter 5Hey! What in hell happened to wolverine? I know he's not immortal a well placed spike to his heart goin under his ribs would do the job.
Work, love, and dance,
Steven(Goruda-GoChi Studios) |
 Ghost Mana 3/23/02 . chapter 1well, if you really want it, i'll ATTEMPT another Evietro... I've been thinking of trying a smut... |
 Ann 3/5/02 . chapter 5 Cheers to Evan and Pietro! |
 Ethan 3/3/02 . chapter 5 DA! THAT'S IT? That's...a bit disapointing...you could have gone very far with this pairing too...oh well |
 batE 2/26/02 . chapter 5No! NOOOOOOO! I am NOT happy, because it's over! :( I want more Evietro sweetness and fluffiness! Do you hear me? More! You must write a sequel to this lovely fic! Please? And soon! I must have more Evietro in my life! |
 Psychodelic Barfly 2/23/02 . chapter 5aww! a bit abrupt at the end, but i know how it is when you wanna get a fic finished and done with... _ |