You said 'To be continued.' UPDATE PLEASE!

I'm enjoying this so far and would love to see more!

This, I like. (Susan-Justin romance has been quite thoroughly Jossed, or perhaps Danned, but who cares? It's adorable!)

Well, first off, I must say I am a big fan of Dan Shive, so I thought checking out a fan-fic for EGS, though rather rare, would be cool, especially since it arrived in my e-mail as an author notice. _ The story seems very interesting indeed. I almost forgot Vladia and the rest of Grace's family, but a few minutes of re-reading reminded me. I like that you included them. I also find it... interesting but not completely unimaginable that Susan and Justin could be married. They were both very close friends and very open, though I do wonder if in this hypothetical relationship how many spats may have been started by underlying feelings of one not being quite what the other wants/wanted as by the comic canon. Still, if people can write fics with Ranma being impregnated by Mousse, then a SusanxJustin marriage is far closer to the realm of believability. The issues between Nanase and Ellen... well, what a complication. I do wonder, though, how this continued after her having seen them together in the hospital. She thought it just a "phase" but they never really endorsed that view. Still, this is one way that it could play out. Years, though, of being "in the closet"... Very harsh indeed, for Nanase to do that to Ellen. Understandable because of the difficulties present, but still. Anyway, to stop my babbling, The writing technique is pretty good. You show you have experience with multiple facets of writing. I'm enjoying the fic for the plot as well as the reading. I can't wait to read more. I do wonder if you mean to be using "Jeremy" or if Junior is like... an offspring of Jeremy. I can't remember if there was an in-comic "Junior" but the description of the... cat like thing sounds like Jeremy.