Reviews for The Moment
Twilightlover1234567890 3/6/13 . chapter 1
lol! that is funny. I wish Alice would have walked in and been all "BELLA! THINK ABOUT EDWARD!"
kat kasie 12/23/12 . chapter 1
i always thought " why didnt they just ignore the phone?" and then you come out with this fanfic. i love it!
Zapphe 12/6/11 . chapter 1
It's pretty good for a short story.
tatiana 10/28/11 . chapter 1
This need's a sequel
Vaako 5/17/11 . chapter 1
Aww, I wish this happened :D Great fic!
MrInigo1995-TeamJacobInigo 1/12/11 . chapter 1
I love this story!
pj 7/26/10 . chapter 1
omg there sould be a sequal..lol
NUNICHAN 7/21/10 . chapter 1
Hell yes! This was exaclty what stupid Jacob should've done when the phone rang. Loved the fact that you didn't forget Alice was around and could hear and see them. You should do a sequel.
jakeluver 7/11/10 . chapter 1
OMG! i loved this story! r u gonna continue?
leelator 7/7/10 . chapter 1
This was sooo cute and sexy. AND it makes sense! Loved it. Thanks for sharing this little gem with us!
Kanu 6/3/10 . chapter 1
I really liked your story. i actually thought the same thing once.. why not ignore the phone? I enjoyed the way ti flowed and i think you did a good job.
kimluvs2read 6/1/10 . chapter 1
Yep that is what I think should have happened and Edward be damned! He shouldn't have left her there alone! Great story, very well written, I love getting both POV's!
SBV2020 6/1/10 . chapter 1
Oh wow! This has to be added to my favourites! It's wonderful. If only New Moon could have ended this way.
zahna.banahna 5/30/10 . chapter 1
Wow! Seriously sexy and just what I had wanted at that point in the book - really amazing!
LynnLautner 5/27/10 . chapter 1
If only it happened like that.
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