Fabulous story! I love the excitment and twists!

This would definately be one worth seeing more of ;)

Great job

this was FANTASTIC!... can we pweez, pweez see a part 2?

Hey Kali! You know that I absolutely loved this story. Hope to see a sequel )

Nifty. Now if only we knew who the significant others were. Sequel? *watches author collapse in exaustion* Okay, you take a nice nap and we'll wait. *sits down and watches unconscious author* :) KC

ok that was just so cool!My fav word is in there too! Cowabunga! hope you write another story!

I like it! This was really good, a nice short to get the day started. It is also nice to see the manriki gusari in use!

Nikki.

I'm confused, I want to know who her mom is!