Great story! Very romantic!

That was such a lovely chapter. I find myself hoping for a new chapter of this story to appear whenever I check my inbox, and seeing one never fails to make me happy.

I love how slow this story is going, it allows us to fully understand their feeling and the situation they're now in.

Only one problem: could you maybe tell us how Carol and Tony ended up bedding each other? Also, of course, update quicker!

I am enjoying your rewrite very much.

Your writing skill has gone down a bit for this chapter, but it's still a great storyline.

You just need to update quicker!

UPDATE QUICKLY PLEASE! :D

I am loving this fic.

It's 3:05am and I can't seem and I thought I'd read your fic - I've being meaning too for a while. I've not read your orginal piece so I can't comment on whats better, I do, however, love this fic - it's brilliant.

Good work.

xxxx

Oh my! Talk about letting the tension build! Please update soooooooon :D

The song really fits; it's a great one too, I had a bit of a sing-song.

I love how you've slowed the original story down and how you're now savouring every detail. You just need to update a little quicker! Good going :D

Having read your original version, I love where this fic is going. I like how you're taking it slower too. Though I hope you update soon! :D

Having read your original version of this story and enoying the plotline, I like how you're setting this one up a bit more before diving in... I think the more you suss out the characters and their relationships and feelings you'll get an excellent story.

Keep updating :)