Lmfao wow, please update soon. I'll be glad to play spot-the-zombie with you in the next chapter. Especially if you continue the Cloud/Seph scene. And even more so if you show us Seph/Cloud's first kiss moment. Because flashbacks are win.

Really liked the way this story seemed to be going. Wish you would have continued to finish it.

It's been years but i hope you update sometime ehehe.. It's such a good fic =/...

I hope you finish this someday...

Also I think you need to re-upload the first six or seven chapters, there appears to be a major problem with some words having gotten lost in transit (I've noticed this a lot with the older fics); give it a readthrough, you'll see what I mean.

Well, I have to admit after reaching the end of Chapter Ten I am disappointed. Disappointed because the last update was a little over three years ago and chances are this little gem has been discontinued.

I've enjoyed reading the ten chapters you gave us though. The first two were poetry in motion, and although I had to slow down my reading and reread some parts it was beautiful when the scene fell complete in my mind. I enjoyed your characterization immensely, and reading two Zack's interact with each other was entirely too amusing for my own good.

This piece of work can be categorized right with A Long Hard Road, previously mentioned in other reviews and by yourself. If by any chance someday you continue this it definitely has the potential to stand right beside it. The pacing of this story runs a bit quick, but it keeps the reader's attention riveted.

About the only negativity you would garner from me would be the confusion between dialogue and story in the first couple of chapters, although I chalk it up to taking place in a 'memory' of sorts, where speech isn't so clearly defined by quotations within the mindset. Also, some of the sentences are missing a word or two in the chapters afterwards, probably due to format and upload I'm guessing.

Other than this, the story was very wonderful to read. I was rather anticipating reading more of the interaction with the characters, during and after this fight with Jenova. I'll go ahead and put this story on alert, and cross my fingers. Although, a little heads up if you ever continue would be greatly appreciated! :)

WHY!?

JUST WHY!?

*sulks*

everytime i find a good story its feckin dropped or ditched or something.

I HATE IT!

*continues sulking*

it was an original idea too *is whining* all the other stories are just repeating themselves in different words, not yours though ACTUALLY ORIGINAL!

but oh boy, you had to drop it.

hmmph.

This is one breathtaking fanfic and I'm sorry I didn't leave reviews of the previous chapters. You totally deserve them. It's interesting how past and future Sephiroths and Zacks are working with and against Cloud. It reminds me somewhat of the masterpiece "A Long, Hard Road" and is every bit as well written and entertaining. Thank you for continuing writing and please don't stop now. I'm hooked and NEED my next fix SOON! lol

I don't often submit reviews...here goes:
AH!
Okay, sorry about that. Needed to get that out. Great Story, nice premise, the incompleteness of it is slightly disturbing, ...
There are some places throughout the chapters where the prose detract from the reader's (my) absorption in the story, basicly, where the phrasing made me pause in my reading wondering "did I read that right?" I will be honest, it does not happen after chapter eight (even with Sephiroth's rambling, it all flowed through the mind's eye very smoothly) Your breaks in the action are nicely timed, even if with Zachery a little longish. Write more action(we liked it alot!) but other than that I have only one other thing to say to you.
I hate you.
Please write more!
I hate you.

Now that that's off my chest, please continue writing. I'll continue reading. And we'll both be happy!

-Reddesquelle Silque

What can i say except i loved your story. i think it's way better than A Long Hard Road (I find it's writing style... disjointed, and characters REALLY ooc - basically, all I can here is the narrator/author herself speaking through their mouth). ALHR could have been great, but...

But never mind that, that's not the point here. It looks like this is discontinued, and I'm kinda sad for it. Hope you will continue, though... Anyways, I really liked the plot, all of it. Your portrait of Yuffie especially.

This was a TRIP! Wow, what a fight sequence! And done so well I was holding my breath as I read it. I really admire how you portrayed Cloud in this story and Seph and Zack are the reverese of the old FFVII story we all know and love. Now Cloud is kicking ** and they are the bystanders! Whot!!

I'm wondering, if Jenova managed to go back in time once, can she do it again? And even though we all know that somehow Cloud managed to learn to ignore and not become a puppet of Jenova's anymore, how exactly did he do it? Don't you? So what will young Cloud do now that he has older (as yet unrecognized) Cloud in his time? And Seph and Zack... ouch! Poor Cloud obviously has them in his time too along with Aeris, so how does he deal with these guys now that their timeline has been almost altered? Or maybe it has been altered... hm... Gotta continue with this story.

Thanks for the read! And the wonderful new idea for an FFVII story!! I LOVE it! ^_^

This is an interesting idea for FFVII! Cloud going back in time to stop Jenova from the future from taking Sephiroth in the past... Wow! I think I'm liking this a lot! Thanks!!

Really,really like the story so please could you write the next chapters faster?The plot is very nice written and i really would like to know what will happen next,so...
You have a wonderful way to write and i appreciate you're work

Really, truly, wonderfully awesome fic! Just...reaaly, really awesome.

Poor Cloud. Poor trapped!future!Seph, too. I really hope they'll be all right. Hope you'll update this sometime, too ^^

Anyhow, really awesome, I hope you update soon ^^

AMAZING.

nuff said. Hope you'll keep this going.

It's been a year, so I doubt you'll update anytime soon. Just wanted to let you know I loved your story. :D