|Reviews for The White Menace|
| Jake 5/4/11 . chapter 1
Nice story line so far, I am intrieged to read more, howevere I think you should describe landscape more. A little haizy on exactly whether or not they are exactly dealing with this battle from bladehenge or another location close to bladehenge.
| prostoann14 8/21/10 . chapter 11
Its AWESOME! x)))
*dreaming about the next chapter*
(sorry for awful English X_X)
| bdun 6/29/10 . chapter 11
between Kabbage Boy getting eaten and the line "hope, freedom, and beer." this was avery awsome chapter. as a suggestion, have eddie and co. aid the gaurdian during the duel by, i duno, destroying power crystals or something.
| bdun 6/29/10 . chapter 8
its good, but... short.