|Reviews for The Demon and the Flash|
| TotalJazzyJeff 1/16/12 . chapter 10
I really like this fanfic and I can't wait for more updates, good luck. TotalJazzyJeff out!
| shinji01ikari 7/18/11 . chapter 10
Yes add cecile to the harem.
liked the story by the way
| Akuma-Heika 5/12/11 . chapter 5
For the nunnaly blindenss Charles's geass altered the mind so he can induce psychological disorders like Lelouch's amnesia.
| kallen all the time 2/7/11 . chapter 10
I hope that Rivalz and Nina aren't having any kids because that would be wierd. If there is a Euphemia clone, I wonder what her memories are. She would definitely be useful in distracting Nina and Suzaku.
| clr2 2/5/11 . chapter 10
I'll read it again from the beginning. You really were working on your fics.
| god of all 2/5/11 . chapter 10
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| Worker72 2/5/11 . chapter 10
Interesting. You know the Chinese actually have a legend about 8 immortal warriors. We've only seen two immortals in Code Geass. I'd agree that 24 immortal Code bearers based on the english alphabet is to much. But to barrow form the Chinese legend you could probably shoe horn the eight into the cannon easily.
Rivalz/Nina and Rolo/Kaguya are you nuts?... I see those two pairing even less then Milly and Lulu. Nina is to creepy to be straight in the sexuality department. No offense. but I think this Madd guy is far to typical of a villain to be the brains behind anything in Code Geass
| The Strike Freedom 2/4/11 . chapter 9
very good story, hope you continue :)
| Jarjaxle 1/3/11 . chapter 9
HAHAHAHA! THIS was Great Serie. Plz Make other Good Stories for now one.
So Lelouch will be zero in Future, And Suzaku, Kallen, Gino and Anya will be his Zero Force eh? X)
I'm Still sad about killing the Black Knights but can't be helped I quess. Also Villetta was killed that is sad.
| JDH1080 12/10/10 . chapter 1
and another story by you, that has a good plot, but some pretty shoddy garmmar. and this one has some bad story telling, i mean like for one, remember in the canon when Kallen found out that Zero was Lelouch, she was distraought, hurt, and almost destroyed, finding out that the man she was falling in love with was really a "lazy" britannan student was hard on her. i think that she would have caused a bit of a xcene when finding out who he was, at this point in the anime.
there are a lot more errors in this fic, i honestly think it could be really good, i think you should get a beat for this, i would love to beta this myself, but im not the best when it comes to garmmar. and i, like Lelouch am lazy.
| Antonio 11/25/10 . chapter 6
I have to agree with your Lelouch Lamperouge/alliteration theory. However, I also wanted to point out that, in French, Lamperouge means "Red Flash". And, ironically enough, whenever Lelouch does a completely Lelouch thing (Geass, duh), there is a *insert dramatic drum-roll* red flash!
| lelouchisbest 10/21/10 . chapter 9
Kickass story. Too bad Shirley died. MAybe you should add Cecile and Rakshata to Lelouch's harem. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| monkeytime 10/19/10 . chapter 9
Too bad Shirley is dead because that would be one wild party.
| kallen all the time 10/19/10 . chapter 9
This story is so awesome. I like Lelouch marries both Kallen and Milly. I know that he will treat both girls right. Can't wait to see what you hvae planned for the future. Maybe some new evil code bearer. This time the kids help out.
| iony17893 10/19/10 . chapter 9
the story was good from the beginning to the chapter 7
after chapter 7 i was totally confused _
also it was hard for me to see milly as a wife to lelouch \
but still even though from chapter 7 i was totally like WTF ?
i still enjoyed reading it ]
it's just seems i can't accept that milly is also a wife to lelouch
and that there are soo many children...
but i guess aside from what i said every thing was great ]