I could just imagine two immortal Jacks running around. The poor, poor world.

Interesting story

This story is pretty good. Except for one small thing... swordfighting/fencing. Fencing is the sport, either foil, saber or eepe (which I never can spell), with rules and is in the Olympics. Swordfighting/sword play would be well, actually fighting to the death with a sword... So, an Immortal taking on a NON Immortal student? Interesting... look forward to seeing how this Daniel resolves the situation.

Interesting place to stop I'll assume there's more to this... Good continuation. Are there more? I'd like to read more. I like Daniel, I especially like cool Daniel. Nice story!

squee! is there more? *drools*

I'm glad to see a continuation of this series. I enjoyed reading it awhile ago, somewhere else, I think. Always wondered what happened to it. - although it seemed a bit different, not certain why I remembered things oddly. I hope to see more soon.

you have a good story here. even though you ended it here, i can see a sequel in the future.