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Reviews for: Metal Schmear Creamy: Sons of Bagels
Princess Hannah 1/10/05 . chapter 9
Wow! That was definatly one of the weirdest MGS fics I've ever read. Weird...in a GOOD way.
bill 11/8/03 . chapter 3
It's funny how Snake has been jiggified.
ShezzbatX 8/1/02 . chapter 9
Hahahaha, it was weird. lol.
The Tesseract Seraph 7/17/02 . chapter 9
...Whoa. An MGS2 story SET in San Jose (heehee!) that doesn't Raiden-bash that seems situationally appropriate and is actually making me giggle like a maniac. ROCK. :D

I knew that thing about Lick Observatory and the darn yellow lights. ROCK. :D It's always nice to feel like things are set close to home...
Scarbie 3/17/02 . chapter 9
Very cool conclusion! Otacon was taking care of business! Thanks for answering my cable question *LOL*. I'll be looking forward to any story you write in the future.
Scarbie 3/1/02 . chapter 7
This was a great chapter with all the drama. I think I know whose at the door and why he's whiter. Pretty soon I'll see if I'm a psychic. I love this story.
Otaku Tess 2/26/02 . chapter 6
Groovy.
Scarbie 2/25/02 . chapter 6
YAY! More story! This was a funny chapter yet so... angsty.

'Cryptography? You mean like Tales from the Crypt?'

IQ of 180 sometimes I wonder if that was a bunch of BS.

I love the last line. I can't wait to see what happens. Poor Snake!
Dbzchick1448 2/17/02 . chapter 1
Funny! Great Story! More!
Scarbie 2/16/02 . chapter 5
For them being broke as hell they need to quit the cable TV.
Scarbie 2/16/02 . chapter 1
I really like this story. I really laughed when I spotted the 'Army of Darkness' line you threw in there.
Adarian Dreamer 2/15/02 . chapter 4
Dude, this is crazy and stupid, but its hilarious!
Otaku Tess 2/13/02 . chapter 3
Weee! Jeeze, you are SUCH a hack, I love it! You're so taking jokes from everything! Snake Plays DDR, Sam and Max's obession with Snake and Otacon rapping, JRR006's white trash thing, plus of course, your oun humor and ideas! This is too funny! _
Otaku Tess 2/12/02 . chapter 1
Raiden: Pretty good. I got a new shipment yesterday. These things are selling like hotcakes.

Question. If things "sell like hotcakes"... why don't we just sell hot cakes?
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